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Poignant and Delightful

"Once Upon A Time in Terre Hill by D. D. Delaney was a tender tale of childhood that grabbed my interest right away and kept it. Brilliantly written, this was full of vivid description. Easily seen from a child's perspective, this story flowed beautifully and was enjoyable and engaging. I enjoyed seeing the world through a child's eyes, especially from this generation. The innocence and naivete were portrayed wonderfully - the author captured young love and childhood so nicely this book was hard to put down. In all, this book was a delight to read and I'm sorry it came to an end. I highly recommend this well-told tale of childhood. Brittanny Davis A Silent Game of Spies"

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A Beautiful and Poignant Tale

"An absorbing, memorable 'autobiographical-style' tale of childhood freedom and innocence and its encounter with the suspicious, guilt-ridden world of adults. Whilst it has the deceptively easy flow of a memoir this tale has great depth. You cannot emerge from it without mourning what has been lost and regretting what has become. So, take yourself back, open your eyes and feel that warmth of childhood again. This is a warm, tender and - yes - sad tale of growing up. Wonderful. I thoroughly recommend it. My congratulations to the author."

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Once upon a time in Terre hill. Wow!!

"I enjoyed this very much. I like how you described the innocence of the kids as they played in the woods. The time that this story took place also gave me a wonderful reference to imagine the thinking and the mood of the country. I could identify with the fear and the rumors that you so vividly brought to life. Being a black man raised during the civil rights movement I can completely relate. Great job. Can't wait to read more. If you have a chance could you read mine? I could sure use some feed back on my writing. Thanks again for the great read."

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I'm swoon!

"I love your style and the way you describe everything. Yours is the first book I read on inkitt and honestly I'm swoon with your book. You've got a unique plot and that's something really hard to find. Keep up the good work!"

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Once Upon A time In terra Hill

"I thought the story had the elements of Lord of the Flies about it because of the many dysfunctional memories and the way it was handled was delightful. The mother who was also a thinker and the grandmother who was a woman who was divorced which was unusual in her day the details were amazing. The sweet hearts were touching."

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Once Upon a Time in Terre Hill

"I'm about the same age as the author and grew up in rural Indiana, farm country near the Dunes. Like him, I was an outsider, but unlike him I never broke through that barrier into having friends--until summer camp, when I discovered others who were immersed in music and acting and dancing. But the land itself was my friend, and I loved experiencing somebody else's vivid kid world in the woods and fields. The characters are vivid, the plot simple and moving, and the writing is REALLY good. Read this, and you'll be transported to a bittersweet but golden past."

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"Once Upon a Time in Terre Hill"

"This poignant novella, "Once Upon a Time in Terre Hill," was full of unexpected surprises! It was "just right" in length and wonderful reading on a snowy afternoon.. The author painted wonderful visuals with his choice of expression--I had the sense of peeking through a window at his childhood adventures and experiences. Several universal themes emerge; childhood naivety, joyful imagination, concepts of freedom, unfairness and cruelty by those who judged what they did not understand, challenges independently-thinking women have faced, damage done by crowd psychology. These are timely themes. Genie's strong and brilliant Mother was a critical thinker who was way ahead of her time--so, of course, she was misunderstood, as many women in herstory have been and continue to be. The persecution she experienced--and by osmosis, her young son--reminded me of influences from classics such as "The Scarlet Letter" and "To Kill a Mockingbird." It was heartening to see them emerge from the fog of ignorance swirling around them in their small town. They were not only exonerated but able to move on with their lives geographically--which was the practical way of handling the situation. Yes, there were difficult experiences and bewilderment at small minded people's nonsense but the resilience of Genie and his Mother overcame all of that."

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Terre Hill

"This was my perfect read for a snowed-in morning-- just sorry when it ended! Intertwining stories, different ways of interpreting life, dreams, and a precious remembering of childhood past.... I hope this will turn into the prelude of something much bigger!"

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Review by Rascal

"Novels that explore childhood and hometown roots abound, but this one is really different! I never knew what was coming next, and it was usually not what I expected. The narrator's tale winds its way through a world that is part surreal, part real, part dream,. I couldn't put it down, It touched my heart, and I didn't want the story to end. Life in 2018 has become so busy and so hyper that it's really refreshing to give the mind a break by taking a journey through a world that is young and fresh and funny. And romantic! Yet this novel is no Pollyanna piece.. There is a poignancy that all who have loved know only too well, and that makes the story, though intriguingly imaginative, true as well. A good read, not too long, not too short, perfect to sit down to in your favorite chair with a cup of afternoon tea."

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Good read

"I enjoyed the plot, however, needs a good edit in places to make it less like a report. eg the first sentence with 'from 1940-1946' is unnecessary as the next line is 'WWII darkened' The author though paints the world brilliantly."

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UUGGHH

"This was very interesting and nice to read."

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