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Lamento del fogón crepuscular

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Status
Complete
Chapters
1
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
13+

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¿Cómo se hace para perder algo invaluable? ¿Cómo se concibe la sola idea de despegarse de aquel fogón que encandila los más fríos recovecos de mi alma? ¿Cómo hace uno para abandonar lo que juró no abandonar jamás? ¿Cómo se rompe una promesa irrompible? ¿Qué hay que matar de uno mismo y por qué vale la pena? ¿Por qué?

Porque mantener encendido el fogón es responsabilidad de uno. Pero, ¿qué hay más allá del umbral de saberes inciertos? ¿Qué hay más allá del cenizal que recubre el porvenir de mis vacíos abisales? ¿Qué hay más allá de la muerte de un amor imposible?

Frío. Niebla y ceniza impregnan un abismo gélido.

Mantener encendido el fogón es responsabilidad de uno. Que se apague también, por descuidos y abandonos.

Soy la brasa agonizante y cenizal de un fogón crepuscular.

He de caminar nuevamente el antro de mi pobre existencia y encontrar el modo de encender la llama que reconforte mis frías y lúgubres tinieblas. Y que de la brasa y ceniza de mis descuidos emerja la chispa furibunda del incendio inminente.

Fuego seré.

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