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The Eternal Dream

"Good beginning and is worth continuing."

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An excellent Piece of Genre Writing

"It is important that a book is judged by the criteria of its genre. It is absurd to criticise a novel for failing to be something the author never intended. In this romance novel, the writing style, the plot and the characters meld so well that the result is totally satisfying. I can only congratulate the author on achieving (in my view, perfectly) exactly what she set out to achieve, - a thoughtful, tender, moving, optimistic and delightful romance. It is an impressive piece of genre writing and an excellent book.."

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Gripping!

"This story is beautifully written. The author has such a powerful, intriguing and mesmerizing style of writing, I was hooked from the off. The characters are so well developed that the reader can clearly visualize them at almost every moment throughout the story. I love this author's work, and cannot wait to read more of your material :)"

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Wow!

"Powerful!"

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Beautifully written.

"I love the way that the writer captures each of its characters so beautifully, that you can almost imagine them. The book is extremely well written. I love how it begins with the love story between the mother and father and concludes with their daughter. I am completely intrigued, to see where this story is going to go next. Eagerly awaiting the next chapters... please don't keep us waiting too long."

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Loved it so far!

"Your book kept me last night and I'm hooked! I love your writing style and the way you insert your italics. I love Laura and Annalise's characters. I'm waiting to read more of Laura's story. Keep writing and I'll surely continue reading this book. :)"

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The Rainbow fantasy

"I love the story. Making it span for 3 generations"

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"It is just like a movie going on "

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