What is your opinion?
Armitage
"Amazing. I really enjoyed this book. I love horror books and you did not disappoint me. Great job. I truly recommend to everyone "
Armitage
"It was a really interesting story. Certain details in the story were very well written. I loved it."
Excellent
"I loved this! Great work :)"
Armitage
"Love the different take on the vampire story. Great read"
Armitage
"I don't usually read vampire stories but, you have an interesting way of luring your readers in. By the time I had a sneakin suspicion vampires were involved I was all in. I had to find out if I was right and see where you were going to take me. The entire thing ended up being a heart stopping, gripping tale. I love the ending. Who would have expected to find romance in a vampire tale? Yet the ending is sweet and endearing. Very romantic...for a vampire!🌹"
Armitage
"This is a very good, well written story. It has a very professional feel to it. The characters are all well developed. The horror, from its subtle beginning opens like a cornucopia to a very strong, nicely planned climax. I really enjoyed the read and strongly recommend it. Mick. MicMac21"
Amazing
"I like the writing style and the puntuatios were good easy to read and good passtime"
Excellently written, would definitely recommend
"Excellently written, a real page turner. I’ve already seen the twist in the tale and am wondering if my suspicions are correct. Will definitely be looking at more stories from this author"
Review
"Great story. Consistent and engaging "
Beautiful!!
"Never have I been so thrilled to read a book as I was now. Beautifully written, it's a real page turner. You should seriously consider publishing this. Keep writing and Godspeed 💓 "
Armitage
"A lot of murder cases have been on the rise in Armitage. Madeline Jameson, a university student, soon realizes she might be the next target after a fateful night when she gets attacked. And the story ensues from there on. Richard Kirk is definitely high on creative power. I was impressed with certain details in the story. However, a fellow critic pointed out on the lack of character development to which I absolutely agree. This makes the story lack certain depth to it when it has a huge potential of doing so. I do not want to give away anymore spoilers since this book is worth the read and the way Richard Kirk revealed the suspense is worth looking forward to - something I did not see coming at all. "
The unknown
"Amazing, I could not stop the thrill and had to download the app"
Armitage
"The writer surely has a very wild imagination... giving Jack the Ripper a new personna. Great job! Only, I feel the story is too short. It could have been more exciting and thrilling if it was longer."
Hello
"It is very well written . it captivates my attention. "
Armitage
"Loved this story, it was very dramatic without being unrealistic. Woyld recommend to others! "
I recommend editing it
"I'm currently finished reading the first chapter and so far it has my attention. I'll list out my concerns. Positives: 1. It's a murder mystery in the supernatural genre, which are two genre subsets that I enjoy reading, especially if they're done extremely well 2. The characters are relatively young, so that leaves lots of leg room for character development, I imagine Concerns: 1. Spelling errors. I recommend you have a second pair of eyes check over the work and then double check it yourself, just to be certain that you have everything that you want to be fleshed out fully. 2. Character development. I'd like to know some more about the location, a few more personal things of interest about your main character. So far, I know that she's a girl, she goes to college, and she jogs early in the morning. I recommend that you describe her approach to the morning and further emphasize her alone time that early in the morning. 3. Secondary characters. I want to know more about the other people who she interacted with. The history teacher seems interesting and I feel that his character is going to develop as I read, but the main character's friends didn't show much character in their introduction. I'd like them to be fleshed out further as well."
It's ok
"It's ok, not great"
