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INTENSE

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Summary

A plethora of words in a whirling tornado Sentences woven with pure adrenalin driven needles And there are no enough periods to end each heartbreaking part Or maybe there are, but the needles are in Maybe we just need to give ourselves a chance to understand....us. Maybe we are not clear enough. Maybe every feeling is not only one, but a million or even tons.

Status
Complete
Chapters
15
Rating
4.7 (3 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

Victims of my Words

It has been too long

Since I wrote down a chapter or typed

Way too long

I forgot how just therapeutic it is

The peace

A gliding ink against the paper

The click-clack of the strokes on my keyboard

It is like flushing my mind

From all the crowded scenes that nagged for me to just write

The characters scheming and lacing themselves through and through

Every thought

Every breath

Every time I blink

Embroidery never sounded better than this though

The sigh of content after the last period decorates the end of a sentence

And one after another…

A chapter comes to life

A world comes to life

It feels so damn good to let go and write

The feelings I liberate through such a simple task

Leaves me with fewer pounds resting upon my shoulders

Knowing my words can capture victims

And keep them prisoned inside the cage of my words

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