What is your opinion?
Most amazing story!
"This is the best story I've read in many years. I can't wait to read more!"
Emerald Eyes
"20 words it is... Its Captivating And rich in complementary details... I hope the completion comes soon enough Thank you."
Book 1 the green eyes series
"Nice quick read, enjoyed everything. Look forward to the next book to see where it's going. "
Dope!!!
"I would recommend this book to anyone that enjoys anything supernatural. To anyone who enjoys conspiracies. Cannot wait to get to the end."
It was great loved it I hope the author updates soon
"Not a technical reader or teacher I look for the content and wether they can capture my interest in the first page"
A Well-Written Masterful Tale
"This is an impressive narrative with believable characters and an intriguing plot line. The time shifts work very effectively and are expertly timed. Sure, there are a few typos and grammatical errors, and there are occasional phrasings which a further edit will polish, but in all essential respects this is a very fine novel which is worthy of support written by an author who shows great promise. I look forward to reading the sequel. (How could I not, after such a great cliff-hanger of an ending?) My congratulations on a fine achievement."
Great read! A brilliantly composed story!
"One thing you can always count on from dmbproject is consummate storytelling. As usual, dmbproject combines a great concept with an instinctive ability to pull together puzzle pieces of narrative, create tension, and introduce multi-dimensional characters at the perfect time. The engaging read pulls you a,long, engages you with the likeable (and unlikeable) characters, and even sends up false flares at times to keep the tension high. I liked that different sections flipped from one time frame to another, and that connections were forged across timeframes. The last few chapters were perfect in their elicitation of suspense, action, and mystery. The cliffhanger begs for the next story, which I will definitely read! I urge the author to clean up some of the wordos and typos, and take a look at other filters to polish the writing of this great story. Well done!"
Awesome
"Waiting for the next update eagerly. Keeping on the edge. I'm getting message that there is an update, but I'm not able to find any. Worried about both Kevin and his family "
Intriguing
"I couldn't put it down. The characters were relatable, as if I knew them. I can't wait to read what happens next. Very good read and a true page turner. Book 2 soon, I hope."
Melons and Emeralds
"I think this story is a great read! It’s mysterious and intriguing, making me want to read more. I especially love Devin, I like how he’s mature for his age but still has the fears of someone his age, like when he’s worried about meeting Sheila. I just like the balance of his personality. I definitely will be reading more!"
Exciting Read
"I think this is an exciting read that anyone would enjoy! I love Devin and the unfolding off his character and circumstances. I found the school creepy and had good reasons too as the story revealed. I think this is well thought out and executed perfectly. I urge any who love a good read to pick up this novel. I look forward to more from this author."
Melons and Emeralds
"The concept is interesting though I have to admit that it started slow and the lack of descriptions did make it hard to know where characters were and what they're doing sometimes. I liked that we got backstory on Kevin's past. I think I found his story more interesting than Devin's and wanted to know what happened after he was reunited with his mom and sis, especially since there's a large gap in between Kevin and Devin's stories. I understand that this is part one but I think a bit more, or at least hints of what happened to Kevin afterwards would've been nice. Overall though, the plot's interesting and does make a good lead in for a continuation."
Melons and Emeralds
"Good plot and structure here! Your characters are very well drawn, Devin in particular. My main critique would be to maybe add a little bit more description into the narrative, as I found it be a little bit overpowered with big chunks of dialogue. Maybe separate it out a little bit. But other than this, I like the overall story :)"
Got me at the Blurb
"-UPDATED- (Now the story makes more sense I understand your grammar much more now, as it's part of the characters dialect.) -Jayne-"
