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Sehr spannend

"Die Story ist sehr spannend und ich hoffe sie geht noch länger "

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It's so good

"This is so good I really loved it"

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The covering

"I ike everything it is good so far but just kinda confusing like how the parts Kinda skip when they are talking but other than that it is pretty good I love the details I am a writer too so I love them "

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Addie5555

"This is amazing I need more❤️❤️"

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Amazing

"This story is amazing and I rlly hope u update it!! Truly is a rlly good story!!❤️🤩"

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Sooooooo love it!!!!❤❤❤❤❤

"I so love the book, a mix between Drama and romance!"

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Please Update

"Could you please update it's been long enough"

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Awsome

"Amazing and cant wait for more chapters. I thank the author of this story"

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I love it

"When will it be updated ?? Other than that I love it"

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Iiii

"Good can't wait for next chapter. Awsome. "

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I love the book " A scrunchie and some red lipstick" because Zach and Scarlett remind me of my two best friends that are dating. I am so into this and hope i will be abl3 to writa as good as you someday.

"I chose the rating based on each section. I would suggest this book to my sister and cousin. I like Scarlett the most"

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I love the book " A scrunchie and some red lipstick" because Zach and Scarlett remind me of my two best friends that are dating. I am so into this and hope i will be abl3 to writa as good as you someday.

"I like how bree is always there for scarlet. "

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A scrunchie and red lipstick

"I love the plot of this book and how each character has a distict story. Also i hope you keep up this story!"

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It's captivating.

"This is Awesome! Can't Wait For The Next Chapter. "

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Gooood

"I hope there is more this is a great read!"

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Likin' This

"Despite being a first draft, this is a very good attempt at placing emphasis on societal issues. I'm enjoying the narrative of the story so far, as well as your nice writing style. WIth editing, I think this could be fantastic. Nice job!!"

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Good work!

"This is overall a good novel. Two main social issues have been targeted. I am looking forward to what happens next. "

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Good Start

"Although A Scrunchie and Some Red Lipstick is a work in progress I think it has a good start. Although I don't quite understand the title which I'm sure the book will reveal later the plot to the story is interesting. The author's writing style is good as well as the author's technical writing skills. I look forward to learning what happens to the main character and how she deal with the abuse. Overall good start!"

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Scarlet

"Realistically, a hospital worker would know the difference between abuse and actually falling down the stairs. Plus the odds that a bunch of teens are unsupervised all of the time is too much of a stretch. All in all, needs some more realism instead of what sounds like a constant repeat of an issue. Story has potential but is angling too hard at a damsel in distress type of scenario."

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