What is your opinion?
Amazing!
"The story has been well written. I was expecting a bit more action and horror but still, it is good. Please keep working at it."
Interesting
"Very Interesing. Although I do not understand fully what is going on at the present time i feel like ive begun a rollercoaster journey of suspense and tension that will keep me on my toes until it is revealed who our mystery ruler of the castle is. I'm interested in Mihaela and her character progression. A strong woman breaking free of parental chains or a young girl with naivety of the true world around her? It's safe to say I cant wait to read more"
survival on the edge of the night
"the most thing i love and appreciate about this story's style is the attempt at approaching the sublime. i can always relate and enjoy any story that deals with the savagery, beauty and danger of good old mother nature. i pretty much only wrote this upon reading the first chapter only so i don't have a good understanding of the plot yet, but my hopes are up."
Very Good
"I like the plot line. Your writing style also flows quite smoothly. Looking forward to reading on :)"
Great Writing
"Great writing, has the ability to weave a a feeling of constant suspense."
INTENSE
"Your writing style is SO GOOD! I couldn't help but reread many lines just because how flawless the structure is. The words choice and descriptions are amazing. You built a great spooky atmosphere."
Intriguing and well constructed
"This is a well constructed and intriguing tale with plenty of suspense and good characterisation. It is in its early stages but the work has lots of potential. I look forward to seeing how the story unfolds. I wish the author every success."
Good Job!
"The story has been well written. I was expecting a bit more action and horror but still, it is good. Your writing style is good but it might be difficult to understand for those whose first language is not English. I want to know more about the Lord in the castle so please update soon :)"
Great Plot
"I thought the whole story was amazing. It's just a struggle when you see a mistake in grammar or punctuation every single sentence. It slowed down the story by a massive margin. But the plot was amazing. I don't think anyone could write a more relatable main character. But if I have to re-read a story just to decipher what it was meaning then the overall story goes down. And this author was really good in moving me and using her characters to really rile my emotions. But with that said I do think that those who are looking for a story to read you can bare the mess-ups and read through this amazing story. Note to the author: Please don't take this as an attack on you or your writing. Many authors on here spell and use grammar incorrectly. And with English not being your first language your better then most at writing then those who read, write, and normally speak English. But maybe getting some help editing or taking a few classes on writing might help you. Either way great story. Keep it up."
Work in Progress
"Overall the initial chapters of the story are alright. The first chapter was very descriptive and draws you in. That chapter I really liked, but the plot gets lost in the following chapters and I started to lose interest after the beginning of the second chapter. Maybe the story will pick up with later chapters."
