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Riveting Angelic Tale

"The author did a fantastic job of introducing this angelic world, in their portrayal of the weighty questions of the afterlife. Sometimes shocking, and other times achingly human and vulnerable, this was a fantastic read. I’m thoroughly looking forward to the second installment. "

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Must read!

"Great book! I read it in one sitting, and loved it! "

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Angels in love

"Great story plot, held interest my all the way through. I suggest reading this book to all my friends and family. The plot did move kind of slow. Everything else was perfect."

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Andels in the dust

"I really enjoyed this. Such a totally different idea. I would recomend it to anyone who enjoys a good story. 5 stars because it deserves 5. Paul "

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Angels in the dust

"Very good but sad. What is the next book name?"

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Angel in the dust

"Fantastically described and fully interesting😍"

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Captivating!

"I simply cannot put it down. It is beautifully written and very descriptive. A definite MUST READ"

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Good

"Very interesting "

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Angel's in the dust

"I loved the difference in story telling it wasn't the same as all the other books. Sometimes different books sound the same when you read them. I like the difference and how it didnt turn out the same. Your book took me to unexpected places and made me want to learn more. I want to know where it goes from here and how will this journey end."

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Great read!

"Love this!"

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Angel's in the Dust LeKat

"Very interesting spin to the storyline. Leads to another riveting story, I cant wait to read. THANK you for an incredible read!"

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PUBLISH THIS!!!!

"this book was amazing and so unique! ive never read anything like this but i sure would like to. i have no doubt that if you publish this book that it would be like the next hunger games series or percy jackson! yes its that good. please concider publishing this book because i would love to buy it. also cant wait for you to finish the second book!!"

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Angels in the dust book 1

"Great story!! thanks for sharing!!"

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Hmmm

"Wow that would be confusing "

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love it!

"This book was something that I wouldn't have typically looked for or maybe even read but I am honestly thankful that I did give a try! This book was an amazing thing to read and I was interested in it the entire time! I honestly could not put my phone down! The characters and the plot just made me fall so hard for this book! I am really interested to read a second book if, and hopefully, there is one! I for one need to see more of Jadin and Alli! oh and Eli he was also a favorite of mine! Anyways in my opinion it was well written although some things could have used a bit more detail, or maybe I just read too fast...moving on, again I really hope there is a second book to read and just keep up the great work!"

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Not What You Would Expect...

"Overall, once I got past chapter 5, I was enthralled with the story. There is much to be worked on, as discussed in the book club comments. Such as the character development of the main character and some more details that needed to be addressed. There are a few words that either need to be added that were missed, such as 'is' 'in' 'with' and other just small words that would make the sentence complete and not fragmented. Aside from the small things that can be worked with and edited, the story line was definitely original and makes you rethink your take on angels. I don't want to give too much away. I had a few favorite chapters, chapter 5 being one of them. There were a couple of twists, which made the story of Alli more intriguing. But all in all, it is definitely a book to pick up and read and fully enjoy. Great job Lekat!"

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Powerfully beautiful

"The story is written beautifully, and I just love the chemistry between Jaden and Alli. Their love - if it is love - is so beautiful, and I love the idea of Markers, Elders, Leaders and Guardians. It's an awesome fantasy. Keep it up! :)"

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Keep 'em coming! Looking forward to the sequel :D

"These Lovely Forms is about Jadin, an angel tasked with marking humans meant to pass, and Alli, a highschool senior and Jadin's next mark. When marked, Alli displays a rare reaction, one that slates her for afterlife duty. But her death does not go as planned and Jadin is tasked with ensuring the natural order as he knows it is not disrupted. This story is young adult, super natural and romance in genre. It most reminded me of the Twilight series and I say that as a fan of those books. The writing in These Lovely Forms is better than Twilight and the story is more interesting, but the base of it, high school girl trying to unravel the mystery that is this brooding stranger, while developing feelings for him is the same and just as consumable. Alli is also a richer character in that, even at such a young age, she has experienced trauma that greatly influences her choices and her very character. This story is written in first person voice, alternating between Jadin's and Alli's perspective, and I think this works well. Because of the POV used, the story gets heavy under the internal musings of the characters at times but not to the point where you just need to put the book down. It is well paced and with some objective editing, the story will be even better. These Lovely Forms is a very good story, cleanly written with only occasional spelling and grammar issues. The characters are written so that the reader quickly slips into their lives and cares about what's happening and why. The last third of the book really delivers and I am most looking forward to the sequel!"

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Excellent read!

"Very much enjoyed this read! Loved the concept, writing style and the characters. I would absolutely recommend this book!"

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