What is your opinion?
Thrilling
"This story is so well thought out. I love how you form the characters, and how the story is written from different perspectives. The sentences at the beginning were a little choppy and had similar structure, but as you got into the story, they smoothed out. Your grammar was quite good. Remember to put commas before coordinating conjunctions when they combine two independent clauses. Besides that, this was so exciting to read. I can't wait to see where you grow the plot from here."
Alex and the Mad world
"I found the story a thrilling experience not difficult but almost uncanny in the genre. I found the style taut and grand there is talent here and there is a dedication to science which I find pleasing. I found that the plague and its people could have been the beginning what and what happened to them daily minutely hourly their fears if only it were longer but if not the second story should be even better. If one is not into writing longer for some reason then one must not force oneself. But I was tantalised I wanted more. Because the author has imagination he can take the setting and make it come alive."
A winner!
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Excellent use of blending fiction with non-fiction
"Great plot! I like how Jordan use fictional agencies (i.e., World Chemical and Military Organization "W.C.M.O.) and interrelates it with actual organizations such as the CDC. Jordan uses an excellent backstory to build up to the suspense of the story. He grabs the readers attention but discussing modern times politics then goes into the creative imagination he has. I strongly suggest this book and encourage the author to keep progressing on his works and keep the stories coming!"
Gripping and Character-Driven
"Jordan has written a taut, emotionally engaging thriller that relies on small insights into its characters to pull the reader along. I was impressed with the author's ability to tap into those fears at the back of our minds of microbes and the duality of the successes and failures of medical science in the face of that unseen enemy, as it were."
Superb!!!
"A very gripping story. I loved how the plot was developed!!"
Good
"Was a good read you have the workings of good writer. Found a few minor punctuation problems here and there however. The pacing was effective and you utilized the first person perspective as needed well done. The plot ties up cleanly and clearly with an overall descent ending. However the story felt too much like a historical lesson as it was written in perhaps an essay format. For a short story doing this style is understandable but can bore most readers when they want to get into a story right away. Granted that is personal preference so take that in mind everyone's taste is different."
Amazing!
"After reading the prologue I was hooked. The plot is a nice twist to the usual zombie story. I loved the change in view from character to character. Overall, it was an amazing read."
Great story!
"The prologue itself was enough to compel me to read the rest of the story. Really a great novelette that was hard to put down!"
Intrigued. Really Intrigued!
"I'm halfway through the prologue and I'm hooked. Great Job Jordan Esperanza!"
