What is your opinion?
A great start
"So, I've read the first chapter of this, and I have to say I am intrigued. I like the concept as laid out in the blurb, and it was a smart move to to tip your hand in the first chapter (as many writers tend to do). The gaps in memory are interesting, and I am intrigued by the lack of information given. I will definitely be reading the rest of this."
Exceptional
"To be frank I don't often award perfect stars there is usually a small detail that nit picks at me. The plot worked effectively and wove the premise of a scifi into an emotional romance piece. It reads well nothing too crazy just humble descriptions and dialogue. I would state some more world building would be great but then again the ambiguous of it all adds to the tension. I did not noticed any grammar issues unless they were minor such as a missed comma here and there. The book was interesting I had to read it in three different goes however since this type of work is not my preference. I dont have much knowledge on scifi let alone romance so from what I could tell you have a good piece of work here. I would recommend this book to the romance crowd. Well Done!"
I really like this!
"You are a great writer and I can see the story in my mind! Well done"
interesting concept
"I really like the concept behind this story. It almost feels like a black mirror episode, and it works well seeing it from two very different character perspectives, I'm very interested to see how the rest of the story goes and would want to see more of the world outside the facility. If I had to give any criticism I would say chapters 9 and 10 felt a bit rushed."
I am hooked!
"I am really liking how this story is turning out. There is really very little to complain about :-)! But, if I were to pick one thing, it would be that the first few chapters seem to progress a tab too slow. However, because of the writing style, one is still inclined to keep reading!"
Pretty Good
"An interesting plot, but it's a bit confusing. I would definitely recommend this. At the same time, there are several grammatical mistakes. That can easily be solved, but there still there."
