Inkitt
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"Super well written and I love the plot didn’t stray or drag. Was informative but fast paste that we didn’t loose track of the story. Emotions were really spot on, I can honestly say it was a roller coaster ride with love, hate, jealousy, sweetness and etc. Love the true lessons that many have to go through. Would absolutely recommend to friends to have a read 💕💕💕"

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Awesome

"The best i have read so far"

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Yeah!

"Awesome. Awesome. Awesome. I love how everybody gets their own story. It's like a freaking saga"

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"Just WOW! What an amazing story from start to finish! Needs some editing but it doesn't distract from the world your plunged in to. I really didn't want it to end! A really amazing writer and can't wait to read more of your books.😊"

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Wow

"A roller coaster of fun . Thank you "

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"Outstanding!!!!!! I had to remind myself that these were teenagers and not adults. The subject matter was so on point for today. You told a story that was simply Amazing!!!! Bravo!!!👏👏"

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"Overall this book is awesome .immediately I started the book I couldn’t put it down even to eat or sleep... kudos author! apart from some grammatical error which I know you will come and edit when you get time ,the book is great and I recommend it to everyone looking for a great book to read "

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Loved it.

"Great story. Loved the plot. Love the twins. Good job."

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Must read!!!

"This story taught me alllllllot !!! How to love and care for others . How racists are ass holes 😑and how we must follow our hearts . Not to trust everyone and anyone and there will be one day someone that will love us uncoditionelly and we must repay their love with ours. I cried at times and some i laughed soo hard and some i became wet😁and we shall know that money rarely does buy happiness .. cuz family and real friends are what matters!!!😚😚 All in all this story is a must read!!"

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"Absolutely wonderful! Sad its over."

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"This book was amazing. It touched base on a lot of issues between a bunch of families. They are all loving and accepting of each other even with all the obstacles they had to face. This book needs a sequel. Definitely not realistic, but what story is? I grew up in a small town, and it was not as fucked up as this one is.... I wish more people were more accepting of others, be it race, wealth, or what have you. Be warned, though... there is mention of violence, suicide attempts, bullying, abuse and other things, so if you can't handle reading about it, you'll want to take a hard pass."

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More to Love

"The book was well written, full of drama, action, romance and love. I've read this book three times, i absolutely love it "

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Wow

"Absolutely amazing! I love all the character growth and development! Extremely well done and very enjoyable!"

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"I really liked it."

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My POV Review

"First, I must say how the first several chapters were AMAZING. A captivating story, a BBW who discovers her own self-worth and the love with twins. As the trio began their erotic journey, on a high school level was relatable. Unfortunately, it began to lose me as the story went on because of the accumulating missteps. I'd suggest using any of the free Articlerewritertool, Grammarly, or ProWritingAid online software to elevate your book."

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More to love

"I absolutely loved this story, I’m so sad it’s ended!"

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"Its an amazing book. I lived the character the backstory to each person , thecgrowthh. I wasnt left confused but always intrigued. I I really "

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Fordgirl

"Wow....that book was just ......wow. 3 days of non stop reading, I couldn't put it down. I would love a sequel of the twins in college and after."

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More to Love

"Love this book😍💖🥰. I've had to reread it because of book 2 but, when I'm down and need to read something great this is the book I come back too. So thank you 😘🤗😏!!!!"

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Beautiful

"Beautifully written many characters in this story but you see their stories throughout without it causing confusion. I can’t wait to start the sequel 😘😘"

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