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Excellent

"Very good beginning to a series. Detailed perfectly and quite adventurous."

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Manipulate

"A really great book interesting and full of suspense and fighting to boot. And if you like these attributes as much as I do you will truly enjoy this book. Thank you for writing it and look forward to the 2nd book."

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Outstanding talent!

"This book is crazy awesome! Your writing style is amazing and I love how much conflict there is between each and every character -- especially Abhaya and Theo. I'm only 2/3 of the way done, and I don't know how this could get any better! Keep up your outstanding work!"

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Amazing

"This story is awesome!!!!!!!!!! I love the plot line and the budding relationship between Abhaya and Theo!!!!!!!!!! Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

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Outstanding!

"I love Abhaya's story and her personality. The story is very well written and has an amazing plot. I have to beg for updates because I love this story so much. I love the characters (most of them, anyway) and how developed they are. There are so many twists and turns that I don't expect, I'm not sure what will come out of the next chapter! I love the plot, it makes me wonder what is going to happen next. Nothing is very predictable, which I love. I don't want to know at the very beginning what will happen. Please keep updating!!!!"

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