What is your opinion?
M For Maria
"Quite the beginning of what sounds like a great story."
random
"i like this book"
Enjoyable read
"I am really enjoying this story, however I would like to see more descriptions within the text to set the scenes a little more, but this can be achieved during editing. I Love the plot and the flow of the story; at times Emma can appear to be a little wooden, but that is another thing that can be addressed through editing and character development. Overall a really enjoyable story so far with lots of twists and turns. Keep up the good work."
Interesting
"The story was intriguing since the first chapter. The development of the plot since Emma moving to her grandmother's town was interesting. The mystery, the suspense was fun to read. The characters were thoughtful and captivating with each one having their unique aura of mystery to them. Though you could add more details on them throughout the novel. It had space for further growth and development, I believe. It's good nonetheless. The writing style is on the point, the pace was good. The only thing needed to enhance the writing would be a detailed description and a few edits. That's all. This book has the potential to be the best. With proper execution of this story, it can hit off the chart. Just have faith and keep writing!"
Interesting
"The story was intriguing since the first chapter. The development of the plot since Emma moving to her grandmother's town was interesting. The mystery, the suspense was fun to read. The characters were thoughtful and captivating with each one having their unique aura of mystery to them. Though you could add more details on them throughout the novel. It had space for further growth and development, I believe. It's good nonetheless. The writing style is on the point, the pace was good. The only thing needed to enhance the writing would be a detailed description and a few edits. That's all. This book has the potential to be the best. With proper execution of this story, it can hit off the chart. Just have faith and keep writing!"
Well done.
"You have a clear and direct writing style. Your main character was, at times, a little naive and silly. Not sure if that's what you were intending or not? The dialogue needs to be more realistic. You have painted Elliot as a mean man, so his dialogue should be reflective of that. Make out his intentions more specifically so the reader sees him as the antagonist. A few grammatical errors but a good read through an edit would fix that. Overall you have written a solid story. Be proud and keep on writing!!"
