What is your opinion?
PERFECT!
"So far, with all the book I give reviews, this one was almost perfect. The grammar, flow of words, character build up, world build up, plot. All was well written! All I can do is give this slow claps *clap* *clap* *clap* Just one advice, please divide your paragraphs to smaller groups, I've been having the hard time to read it because the sentences were too packed up in your paragraphs. Other than that, I can keep my mouth shut up and enjoy reading the rest of the chapters. SUPERB WORK AUTHOR! TWO THUMBS UP FOR YOU WITH SLOW CLAPS!"
Fallen
"What I've read of this book so far has been extremely well written with a good balance of action, description and dialogue. The characters are unique and interesting. From the first chapter this book grab my attention and held it strongly throughout the chapters I have read so far. I'm interested in reading more to see what becomes of these characters and will be looking out for new chapters!"
Tremendous Potential
"One thing is for sure...this is one to read now before you have to pay for it! Though only three chapters are published, Fallen is shaping up to be a finely polished work, full of well defined characters, and descriptions that awaken all five of the senses. DoubleA18 does a fantastic job of subtly introducing the readers to the main character, with her struggles, fears, and a painful past. The tempo of the story is just right, as the action woven into all of this great writing keeps the pages turning. I am submitting the review now, but this is one I will definitely keep my eyes on."
Remarkable!
"From what I've read so far, I have come to the conclusion that the author has a very interesting writing style. that moves like butter as the story traverses ahead. This is a character-driven story which has an interesting concept but is made remarkable by its passionate cast of characters. Their personalities are so well built from the very beginning that despite having read three chapters it made me feel as though I have known these characters for ages. The reason I started to read this story was because of its Pirates of the Caribbean vibes but now I will continue reading it for its amazing characters! Over-all a unique read I'm glad to have taken the time to read!"
AMAZING!
"You are such a talented writer! Especially love the plot!!!!!"
Interesting opening
"The dream sequence was a nice way to draw the reader into what was happening and to make sure they'd want to know more. And the scenes are painted very vividly which is always a pleasure to read. While romance is not my traditional cup o' tea I enjoyed the chapters that have been put up and would like to see where this goes. Having said that, however, I would offer the feedback of being careful when crafting the scene with such detail. Too much detail can cause problems when small mistakes take a reader out of such a well crafted scene. And chapter length is always an issue and matter of personal preference, but if you want to mold the story for the main stream I would suggest trying to keep the length at a maximum of 2500 words per chapter. It was sound advice when I got it and it helps to keep an authors thoughts from rambling when set with a hard limit on the number of words in a chapter. Over all it was fun and easy to read so keep up the writing!"
