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Remarkable

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Summary

They locked her away for something she didn't commit. Now, she wants out.

Status
8yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
4.0 (1 review)
Age Rating
16+

The 1st Chapter

Some people live for fame. Some people live for love. Some people live just for the thrill of living. But me, life is too complicated to live for anything or nothing, so, I don't think about it. I try not to think about a lot of things. Maybe I don't think about the- oh- never mind it's not important. See? I'm good at this. But sometimes I can't help my self from thinking up a little story or idea about when I get out of here. But then I might punish myself in my thoughts for thinking up something so immature, unreal, idea. I mean, I will never get out of here. I don't want to raise hope for something that's never going to happen. Mother would be proud of how well I've been coping my thoughts. Maybe someday we will even see each other again. Oops! Here we go again with my elongated thoughts and dreams. If I ever DO escape, I will go jump off a cliff as punishment for all the thoughts I have accumulated these past 258 years in Fort Arlington.

" You will never get out of here," they'd all say to me.

"You will die here," they'd all say to me.

It gets quite depressing after 258 years of being told you will never live, change, grow, leave. All because you did one bad thing 259 years ago. Now that I've been here, I've come to realize that I don't deserve to be here. I don't deserve to be locked away. I should be with my Mother. Her and I on Earth together. It's a dream. But they have made my dreams into nightmares. And me along with them.


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Just after reading the first chapter, I am hooked onto this. Please do update soon.

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