What is your opinion?
A good book
"I loved the book. You have a amazing plot and the story overall was very good. But the reason why i didn't give you five stars on your technical writing skills was because in the sixth paragraph of chapter 4 there is a mistake with the quotation makes on is facing the wrong way. it says "....... our doing " Aunt Vera began..." and the quotation mark between doing and Aunt Vera is wrong. But other than that you book is amazing."
Amazing
"It's amazing, innovative and engaging. The protagonist communicates directly to the audience, making me feel connected and involved in the story. I'm excited to see more."
Thrilling
"Like what I've read so far - intriguing."
OMG
"it was unbelivable, your writing style is perfect i loved it too much i just enjoyed the story it was a very good story keep going"
Wow!
"I love it! You've set the plot straight and clear, and it's definitely very enticing. I love how you're not using the typical fantasy creatures (werewolves, vampires and demons) and I can't wait to see where the story goes. You've introduced the characters and the story very well, so all I can say is, keep doing what you're doing!"
Rings
"The author narrates in the first person of a superhuman and so far is pulling it off. I think this is very difficult; so, she will have to sustain the ambiguity. The reader must realize that these are human-like characters who are superhuman. I hope the author reveals more of the ethnic origins of this story. I wonder if there is Russian mythology here or Balkan. It really is quite violent making me wonder if brutality of the last war in former Yugoslavia influenced the story. In that war the various sects were superhuman compared to others with whom they had lived under Tito as humans; then they ripped each others' inner beings out. The hatred and brutality were horrific, and the narrator here speaks of some pretty gruesome stuff. Hope she can keep up the ambiguous trickery of the humans and superhumans for a whole book."
Good read
"Well. Here is a great plot. A totally different one.. Story that has something to do with mortals and immortals... A story that has so much info about souls and spirits.. Wow. Great creativity.. One thing I just wanna tell you is...you just need to make your sentence crisp and better than it is now. For ex.. Instead of saying i was just tired you said, i just was tired. Ofcourse it has the same meaning, but thats not the very right way to put it as. And keep an eye out for punctuations too. Many quotations are facing the wrong way, used capitals at the middle of the sentence, etc. Other than that it is a great read.. I love to see how it all ends finally... Keep it up. "
Nice!
"Having read the four chapters, I thought the story was good fun, with interesting characters. What really sold the book was the fantasy. Although the plot resembles several other books in certain ways, I've never read about any creatures similar to yours yet, and your ideas and knowledge on the background of your world was great. I loved the idea of having creatures like this living in the same world as vampires, and the fact that it was the mythical creature talking instead of a human. There are still several things to improve - grammar and typos, many which I pointed out, and at times the way the story is written. I think there could be more tension by having tighter sentences, without extra, unnecessary words. Otherwise, this was a good read! Carry on!"
