What is your opinion?
how to cure a vampire bite without losing your mind
"mind blowing book i'll suggest to anyone it justs gets turns and twists everywhere and the ending o my god i almost slipped my phone due to my laugh wow great the plot is totally different and i just love the way its written and the author's bold comments unexpectedly great book"
A potentially great book if published.
"I certainly liked it. It has a way of making you want to read it over and over. The different characters and how they come together in this book is remarkable. I can't wait to see what this author puts out next."
Great!!!👍🏼👏🏼
"Loved it and enjoyed it. I would definitely recommend this novel to a friend. Keep on writing and if you can, make a second part too. I would definitely double check your grammar and punctuation too. Thanks for the story."
Loved It!!❤️
"I really enjoyed this book, and I extremely recommend for every one to read it. I wish for a part two that has how they get back to their own time and also what happens with Sebastian and Phyllidia, and Orcus and Mallory."
Great Story!
"I loved this story. The characters were very interesting and engaging. The plot was very interesting and I had a hard time when I had to stop reading - just wanted to read it all in one sitting! My only complaint on the story is that sometimes I felt like the storyline jumped from one thing to a totally different thing without a smooth transition. Often, I had to go back and read the previous paragraph to try and understand how the jump was made. But other than that, wonderful read!"
Good but needs commas
"Time-travelling vampire? I thought I heard all about them. However, I have to say that the story flows well. I read a lot of chapters without noticing the hour (and now it's the dead of the night :P). Nice if you want to spend easy hours, with free mind. And now, critics :P Few refusal mistakes should be correct to avoid distraction for readers (i.e. dots are three/dialogues formatting). I'd cut brackets infos or rewrite them because I like to know the character during the story in a natural way. But most of all commas are missing. Comma help the reader to breathe. Good writing Bianca"
