What is your opinion?
MORE!
"Can't wait to read more! That cliffhanger is killing me! But the story is great. Suspense is amazing! Can't wait."
G R E A T!
"A few errors her and there. But the story is amazing. Looking forward to it :))))"
Amazing start
"I loved the story. Well the starting of it. Can't wait to read more. A female alpha and a bad boy. Definitely a great combination. The suspense got me hooked 😍"
Love it!
"A few grammatical errors nothing major. I love the whole plot and suspense. Can't wait to read more! "
A very different approach. Love it!
"A unique plot. An Alpha getting bullied? Oh dear. It's different from the classic werewolf stories. I'm so interested to see where this story takes us. I like the writing style of the author. From the first chapter, I can say that the book will be a breeze of fresh air. Good work author.😊"
quite nice
"I like it but it is too short only a setting but i like it :) I think you should have him end up not being a human but something else that is really dangerous and have a love triangle going on too"
Good beginning
"This is a good beginning to your story. I like your characters and the descriptions of the struggle that goes on behind bullying. It is a fresh take on werewolf stories. I think you need to read your work out loud and this will help you find those little mistakes. Or ask a friend or family member who is good at punctuation to look it over for you and help you out in that department. On the whole I think it is a very good start to your novel and I urge you to keep writing. I would have read on if there had been more!"
Want to see more
"I feel that this story has a lot of potential that is why it has a 3 out of three because this story really has something but you need to work with the grammar. try some grammar apps though that won't help much it can help a little bit. You need to clear up somethings in the story such as why does the pack bully her. Overall I think that this is a great story and I want to see more from it as you grow to become a writer. If you want me to give you another review when you are done with the mistakes and have more chapters let me know"
