What is your opinion?
Thriller packed.
"A great start. I fell in love with this book already. Everything seems to be advancing in a great flow. Though there are some grammatical errors. But they should not be given any attention. I really liked the way you started this chapter, simple and efficient vocabulary. Keep the pace. You really have the talent. Can't wait to see what you hide for the second chapter. Try using Grammarly. It would save you a lot of time while writing and would reduce the burden of editing."
Alpha Cyrus
"My only suggestion would be to spot check the random usage of the capital letters in the middle of a sentence or some missing punctuation. It just helps the story read smoother. I will check back when you have a few more chapters complete ( I am only able to see 2 so far)"
It isn't awful
"It definitely isn't the WORST thing I've ever read. That being said, it doesn't grab my attention. There are some grammer issues. The plot is interesting. The story itself just needs further development."
