What is your opinion?
Purple fever
"I really like the story. I like the type of writing style that the author uses. I also like how detailed you are with everything in the story. I don't really know how to write reviews, But overall I loved The story and How you wrote it."
Great Start
"Beautiful start. The plot is intriguing and different, which I appreciate more than you know. I'm tired of writers which disparage the art of writing with the same dull plots, unauthenthic characters, and lack of moral purpose. You sort of defied this is here. When I first read the intro I thought of prejudices and unfair platitudes that exist within people towards others for inherent or genetic characteristics. What I mean is, you're doing a great job, continue to incorporate important messages into original plots and you'll have a great story in your hands. - Remember S M I L E and I N S P I R E "
Buetiful
"this is a buetiful earning story that is amazing"
Leaves You Wanting More
"Very intriguing read. The summary is what pulled me in most as I wanted to read about the protagonist tricking the purple eyed people with her contacts. The first chapter left me wanting more, so my only complaint is I wish there were more chapters posted. Overall a good read with no noticeable mistakes in spelling and punctuation. "
Love the concept
"I loved the concept- I’m eager to see what problems arise from it, like what the people in this world think of the rulers being chosen because of their eye colour. The ending was especially good! I can’t wait to read more!"
Purple Fever
"To be honest I just love this.~ I love this new type of story that you were able to introduce. I never thought of something like this before. Even though I'm not good with grammar I can tell that you did a good job with this. I can't wait to see what happens next!! 😆"
Purple Fever
"I love your introduction to the characters and how you explained the background behind why some people had purple eyes and others didn't. It made it really easy to understand. Your style is well-written, but some of your sentences seemed kind of basic. I don't know if that's maybe because English isn't your first language, but I think your story is great nonetheless. Maybe just work on attention to detail and more complex sentence structures. But definitely keep writing! I'm interested to see where this goes : )"
