What is your opinion?
Very good 😊
"Very amazing novel 💟 I really enjoyed reading your novel and can't wait to read more of your novels 💖💖💖"
title
"some of this is really confusing "
Good one
"Its interesting "
Amazingly written
"I am not fond of fantasy genre but this story got me glued.. i love the twist here n there.. and the jokes.. they are truly funny"
😊😊😊
"Loved 💕it!! "
Perversed
"This book is awesome. It's not confusing and it is building up towards a great revelation near the end. I like the backstory of the characters. My favorite character is the Mexican. He is very funny. I had fun reading the entire book!"
Unique Quality Entertainment
"I haven't seen such a unique way of writing a novel. This book is detailed but it is still holding back! I can't Book 2 could be bulkier than this and I can't wait to read it when it's done. The story had a lot of twists, I tell you A LOT! I read some reviews and the first review says it all. I would like to personally speak with the authors to conduct my own interview on them. The story has a beginning, has a climax, a conclusion! However, going through that road is really a roller coaster. Too many secrets to unfold and I also found some that show their love for their culture... Japan and Philippines. I also noticed that the two studied other countries and their culture and history. Correct me if I am wrong but, You took some inspiration from The Nun (2018). That was epic!"
Creatively surprising
"After the first time I read this and after the authors took in my review to make there book better makes a good difference. Now I can't say anymore, I'm no professional and Sir G C Fer and Shinku-san are both Good writers, better than me, and tbh they're my IDOLS. Their book is a real inspiration for me to improve my writing! Thumbs up for taking my advice Senpai's! I can't wait to read more of your books when I come back."
Plot with Porn and not Vice Versa!
"Two authors, two very different writing styles. I was able to contact the Japanese author on Facebook and he said that G C Fer (Filipino) was behind the Fantasy, Action, and Adventure part while he (Shinku) was behind the Erotica, Dark Romance, and Suspense-Thriller part. The two authors got this right mix of ideas and that the story indeed is engaging having a lot of surprising twists and turns. The story part gets deeper and it has a full history behind it that makes me want to find the answers in the sequel because it gives you a better idea about the what if scenario type of events it's just wow. The idea themselves are overwhelmingly scary, in my opinion that it makes me feel like "WHAT IF" it were real? The erotica is so immersive that it triggers glands to secrete hormones that would send messages to the brain giving off the sense of pleasure to say the least and that the author deliberately "sometimes" would leave you hanging like "What the hell happened next?!" The world-building is just WOW. G C Fer made the world and Shinku took some elements of the original unpublished story into this one. As for the punctuation and grammar, I'm not really critical into those matters since the placement of ellipses indicate how people would actually talk "INFORMALLY" and "IMPROMPTU". The comedic play and interaction with the characters are fantastic that the plot twists were hidden in plain sight. I want to read more and I want to see an animated version of this one in the future. I would definitely recommend this to my friends."
Pretty good idea but a little bit all over the place
"All over the place but pretty good concept i want to know what happened next"
Grammer
"The story is decent. There are a few words missing or just the wrong one in the spot like of but it says if. I personally prefer cock to thing and joystick"
Too fragmented
"The storyline  lacks cohesiveness,, extremely hard to follow. there seems to be no definitive storyline. I’m hoping the author is extremely young and just needs some growth. I was unable to finish the story. It was nothing to hold my interest at."
