What is your opinion?
Recommend!
"Would definitely recommend this novel!! The plot was paced perfectly in my opinion and the storyline itself kept me interested theoughout. There are a few grammar issues but nothing too bad and none of them are consistant. The only advice I can give to the author is to be sure you're story isnt reading like a list. For example, instead of saying: "she went to the bathroom and got dressed, when she came out..." you could say instead, "after exiting the bathroom freshly dressed..." Its a flaw I see many authors make (and one of the hardest things for me to find in my own novels) and if it happens too often it can break up a book too much. But this was the only thing I could see that was fairly consistant throughout the novel. Honestly, excellent work! For those of you who read the reviews before reading the book, I tell you: read read read!"
Potential!
"This story has potential! Your plot is on point, however; you need more description!!! And I suggest grammarly for your grammar issues. otherwise, good job!"
