What is your opinion?
Great Fanfiction
"I do love Legos and the Lego movies so of course this was really good. Your writing with ways to make it clear who was talking was very good. I would just recommend that you would replace the initials for each character when they speak with their names. Besides that, it was an excellent piece. Does bring up the question of when there will be Lego figures of gods."
Well done!
"I really enjoyed what you've written so far! Re-writing movies etc is really popular nowadays and I think you've done a good job! Just be mindful of your punctuation and grammar and make sure your paragraphs aren't too long as this might make it confusing/overwhelming for your reader."
The Lego Movie
"I'm not a big fan of rewritten movies, but I have really enjoyed this one so far. Yes, there are spelling and punctuation that could be better, but for the first book, you did a good job. Don't give up, keep writing. It takes a little while to start feeling the flow. Good Job!"
