What is your opinion?
Love the idea
"This is one crazy story, but I liked it. The idea and concept of someone committing a crime every week and no one knows who, it kept you guessing. I would suggest fixing some of the grammar in this as well as separating parts of the story with a line or some kind of symbol so it doesn't look like everything is forced together. But this is a good read."
Cool!
"I always like this kind of twisted story and your story is new for me. Well, I can't say much here, but I like how cruel the world had turned. Anyway, I think the breaking and entering week felt too short and I somehow feel the need to leave the characters unnamed (or maybe I was just not in focus). Oh, but overall, I like your idea!"
Worse than the Purge
"And I mean that it the best way possible. Instead one night a year, it's a week long event - every week. I love how the author captured the disbelief of how people actually "trusted" each other. Great piece to give you the chills!"
Interesting outline but lacking detail
"The story itself was very interesting, but there was very little characterization and detailing to the story. It took me reading through the first paragraphs a couple times to get the names straight. There were no details associated with the names and characters so all they were was names that I had to try and somehow keep straight. Even by the end of the story I had no idea how anything looks. The holograph had no physical characteristics, the people had no physical characteristics, and the house's only physical characteristics were a couple of rooms and hallways. This story has a lot of potential in terms of an interesting plot for a short story. The plot was engaging and was what kept me reading, but I felt like I was reading a white world with gray walls for rooms and black shadowy outlines for people. (I did imagine that the holograph looked like Spike from Buffy because spike...) but otherwise everything was a very blank world. Even a couple of details would have spiced it up a little bit."
