Back to Story

Average Ratings

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation

What is your opinion?

amazing

"I loved the story. I was able to get lost while reading this. I had to keep reading to find out what was going to happen. I really hope you write a sequel to this. I want to know if they come back to each other and how everything turns out."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Brava!

"I have just recently started reading your work and it has come along way. The first story I read was a fandom about Narnia and it had quite a few hiccups, but seeing your most recent story compared to the first one you wrote.... wow! Your writing has improved quite a lot. The story was extremely detailed and you could feel the main character, Brianna's, emotions. The reason I'm commenting mostly on the detail and emotion is because I find that these two concepts are what help the reader understand the story itself the same way the author felt as he or she wrote the story. The detail and the emotion are what draw you in. They make you want to see what happens next (I'm not saying that the other concepts are unimportant, I'm just hitting on these two at the moment) Another reason why I'm discussing these two concepts is because the first story you wrote was lacking these concepts. I'm not saying that they weren't there, it's just that they didn't flow right and it sometimes didn't make sense. Overall, this story is a major improvement on your part. Keep up the good work! And PLEASE write the sequel soon!! - Aqua_Lilly :3"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
I love this!!

"This is the best book in the whole wide world (besides the Bible). You need to write more books because you have so much talent. You are one of a kind (in the best way possible). Keep fulfilling your dream and you will probably make it really far in life! Have a blessed day!!!!!!"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
THE BEST IN THE WORLD

"This is the best book I have ever read in my life I mean I am a critic and This is the best I work with people who work on the newspaper in New York but this is The BOMB .COM Mr/Ms keep on writing I love it :)"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Super! :-)

"Hi Grapejuice101, I enjoyed reading the first six chapters last night 'til about 3 in the morning. Meaning I loved your story, your style, your plot that I forgot the time. Although I know the movie version of 2004 which was my first movie from "the Phantom of the Opera" and am too a phangirl in my own way. ;-) What really made this story entertaining to read was by adding the character Brie/Brieanna and how her reaction would be when she saw Erik, the Phantom and of course the other important characters like Raoul, Meg and the new opera owners. Keep up with writing and don't doubt yourself. It's great! ^.^ A small correction in chapter 20 or 21 with French language, Goodnight is bonne nuit and not bonsoir. Bonsoir is good evening. Cheers!"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
5 stars all the way!!

"This is amazing!! :) I really do hope this book wins. You really have quite the imagination. Very well written....I wish you the best of luck with everything. If I didn't know, I'd thought you majored in journalism while in college. I have never seen The Phantom of the Opera, but I hear it is very moving and a favorite upon many. I look forward to seeing your name appear on the New York Time's Best-Seller's list. Congrats. xo"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
love it

"i love this story like omg so cool i love it yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaas love it so mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccchhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
Review

"I love the book, and I'm almost certain it's going to be published. I've never read a book similar to it and I think it has the potential to become a best seller. This fandom book is a huge hit with me and will be an even bigger one with the market. I'm going to recommend this to anyone who will listen and then some! Best fandom I've read so far."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
One of the best stories I've read in a good while.

"I love this story and if I had to rate it I would give it a 9 out of 10. The plot itself is engaging and without giving much away the main character acts like a normal human being would, with thoughts and emotions. She's not just there to move the plot along. The writing style is simple and easy to follow without being distracting. You could easily picture yourself in the same situation. There were few if any mistakes in punctuation, grammar, etc. This is a must read and one of the best fan stories I've ever had the pleasure to read. If I didn't know better this could be it's own novel."

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation
sucks

"this story sucks like crazy i hate it oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggjust stop okay"

  • Overall Rating
  • Plot
  • Writing Style
  • Grammar & Punctuation