What is your opinion?
Nighmares of someone else's choosing
"The author has a unique style, blending the background seamlessly with the present, and by chapter three the tension has truly racked up as we see physical injuries plague the heroine just as much as her nightmares. It's shaping up to be an excellent horror tale."
I'm so excited to read more!
"I am in love with the concept and plot of this. You have a very creative way of telling Angela's story! There were a few things that came to mind while reading. Some were technical and others were more around world building but I thought I would leave a general overview here. The technical stuff were just simple things that are easily missed like spaces after commas. Through the first 4 chapters, I noticed there wasn't a lot of description of Angela's surroundings and I thought that would be a nice way to make the story even more immersive. Overall, this was a great read so far. I felt the pacing of it was steady and made for a comfortable read while we're still getting to know the situation."
Could be better
"It is certainly an interesting read. I like the plot, the characterization, the pacing and the way it has been written. The plot is quite unique and not something that you'd expect to find commonly. And the journals and letters that have been written in first person POV provide a good insight into the story. Although, I'd say that the author can try to amplify the ominosity of the situation. So far into the story, the 'incidents' that should be disturbing are quite subtle. It's not a bad thing actually. It creates an eerie effect, sure. But I think this book needs a little more unexpected plot twists and maybe more vivid descriptions. Overall, I'd say that this is a unique book that requires a little polishing, but is certainly worth reading."
