What is your opinion?
Amusing
"I found this to be a highly entertaining piece of fiction. I’ve never come across a story that has made me laugh so hard. The characters are colorful with their own unique blend of personalities and I got a sense of your own originality in your excellently done world building. I truly think that this story would make for a great comedic animation were to ever become one. I highly recommend for those looking for some more color in their reading."
Entertaining
"As a work in progress, this was a funny and overall entertaining few chapters. Highly imaginative and descriptive. Those who enjoyed "The Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy", will get a kick out of this novel."
Creative and Fantastic
"Up until I have read so far, 3 chapters, the story is stunningly amazing and hilarious (I laughed for an uncountable amount of times), it didn't take me long to get hooked. The characters are vibrant and relatable (Mengo reminds me of Kang the Conquer and Thanos for some reason), the plot is very intriguing, and the way it's written out, it feels like it would certainly work for an animated movie or show. The descriptions and the world building are on-point, amazing. Can't wait to read the next chapters."
I smell a fun sci-fi adventure!!
"I thoroughly enjoyed this story! It is filled with colorful characters that you are able to relate to (even the bad alien with an idiot brother and scary mother). I also enjoyed the descriptions that were perfect for constructing the world without being to wordy. I hope that the tale will continue because I see it as a unique narrative that will hook readers like it did for me."
Inventive and Imaginative
"Highly imaginative, the characters were solid and dynamic and the story flowed easily. The detail was great – very original and shows lots of promise. Definitely recommended. – Brittanny Davis"
Good
"Loved The plot alot it was refreshing and loved The way story proceeded . Got me hooked from The get go !!! 10/10"
Real good short story
"Alright, big fan of sci-fi as well as superheroes (grew up with DC and Marvel comics in the 80's and was one of the few kids at my school reading those as they weren't trendy yet at that time) so when I started to read your story, it didn't take long to get me "onboarded". I really liked the fact you created a character that is a mix of Ming the Merciless from Flash Gordon and Thanos from Marvel Comics and yet managed to make it believable so good job here. You have a few lines that cracked me up (i.e: "He was so thick that two short planks would be charging him money to do his homework" or the "humerus uterus" part [don't want to spoil it for other readers] as well as other good puns.) Now for the more critic part, I really wish you had developed this more. A longer story would be great since the end of it is all too sudden and comes too fast in my opinion. Now about your descriptions, some of them are just spot on, some are way too deep and detailed. Might be my personal opinion but I do like to have some space for my own imagination to figure out untold details and consequently visualize the scene on my own with the help of the writer and not just been told by the writer how exactly it has to be. (Hope this makes sense but basically, too many details kill the scene for me). You have a few typos and some grammar issues and other mistakes here and there but all you need is a good proofread by an "English Major Bestie" (all author should have one :P ) and you'll be good to go. I seriously think you should work on making this a proper novel, you have the imagination, the inspiration and your own writing style that is quite funny and surprising so why not making this a "book" and not only a short story. Altogether, I liked it and defo recommend it if people are in for a quick read."
