Innocent kiss

"It's nice,keep writing 😁😊🫰🏼👍🏼"

The Keys of Fire

"I frickin love this book so much!! Literally, if you changed the names this would be such a popular book and I’d 100% buy it! Thank you for putting this out there for people like me to read. You are such an amazing writer and took me on an emotion roller coaster"

Fairy Tail, romanticised

"All Nalu shippers should read this story. And really, non-Nalu-shippers should too, maybe this piece of genius would make them come to their senses. Fabulous writing style from the first sentence to the last. And very few highly noticable typos or misspellings, which, considering the lenght of the 'book', is amazing. The plot is great, and I especially like how the characters managed to stay in character ;) (almost throughout the whole story). All in all, loved it."

The keys of fire

"The best fairy tail fan fiction I have ever read "

Freaking amazing

"I've read this book 5 times now I know I'll be coming back for more sooner or later. Maybe you should try changing up the names of places and people and you could publish this as an actual book or make an actual show from it. I know I'd watch it."

A book I will never forget

"Honestly, I think this is the greatest fairy tail book I have ever read! I loved every part of it and the emotional ride it took me on! I thought it was beautiful and I was gripped the entire time reading it I wish more people could enjoy the book just as I did. To whoever is reading this and hasn't read the book enjoy this pleasant rollercoaster and share it with everyone you can. Thank you for writing this book I was amazing. "

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This.Is.The.Best Story.I.Have Ever.Read!

"Can i just say that you the most the amazing person in exsitance? Like your a freaking GOD! The way you explained what would've been their magic, and E.N.D?! Amazing! You're awesome! Don't let anyone tell you otherwise!"

Exciting opening chapter!

"Hi LoneStorm, This is great! Wasn't too sure what to expect when I started reading, but you set the scene well, including some beautiful descriptive writing that created a wonderful atmosphere: "A violin played somewhere far off, accompanied by the gentle lapping along the port docks." You quickly got into the action, which is really important for hooking your readers, and I felt real panic and concern when Lucy was captured. Then as suddenly as it started, she was rescued by this thrilling stranger... and so the story begins! Great characterisation of Lucy and Natsu, instant chemistry and mystery... I haven't read the whole novel yet but what I've read so far has captured my attention and I'm very happy to give this a 5-star review. Best of luck with it! Mike Born Of The Flame"

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The Best AU of Fairy Tail of NaLu Romance!!!!

"If you love love Fairy Tail and are searching for a great fanfiction story starring Natsu and Lucy, the hunt is over! If you love romance, adventure, mystery, intrigue, high action packed drama and lots of humor, you will sitting on the edge of seat as you consume this hilarious and exciting fan fiction. Truly, this is of one the BEST fan story of Fairy Tail!!! Written in a modern alternate universe setting, this story follows the adventures of lady-like Lucy Heartfillia as she meets childlike pyro: Natsu Dragneel who brings to his home Fairy Tail, she she meets unforgettable characters who become her family and trained in the art of ninja by none other the our favorite pyro! This exciting tale follows Lucy and Natsu's adventures as they battle dark guilds, deal with the wild antics of the Fairy Tail guild and friends, the secrets behind their past, as well as their reluctant ever growing romance for their each other, while others are secretly betting on their relationship. Of course, this does not exclude other Fairy Tail romances as well, such as Jerza, Gajevy, Gruvia, etc., as well bromances as well. This story makes you wish this is more of how Fairy Tail should turn out. But I'll let you be the judge of that as you read it for yourself! ;-)"

It's all your fault!

"I've been reading more of this story every chance I got, and staying up too late multiple nights now- SO GOOD. Crucial to my enjoyment of a fan fiction is that you really GOT those characters- I felt like I could hear their voices and see them doing those things in their alternate reality land. The idea of Fairy Tail having a boarding school complete with secret Bro Code was great, and there was a lot of having to explain why I was laughing. One of my favorite things was the switch from magic to martial arts, especially having Lucy -and Levy!- get to be more physically kick-ass characters. Of course, the romantic bits were sweet, and the epilogue was very satisfying. To sum up: I love it, thank you!"

Fangirlsonice

"I absolutely love this story. LoneStorm spins a tale of love and adventure and does it well. All of the characters are well developed and will have you enthralled in the story. Lucy and Natsu's love story is beautifully told and their adventures exciting. This story will make you wanting to read more of LoneStorm's stories."

The Feels!!!!!!

"It was absolutely amazing! I love that you went with the original plot story, but also placed your own twists on it like the ninjitsu! I couldn't take my eyes off of it (it's midnight as i write this btw). I finished it in two days it's that spectacular. The NaLu ship sailed in this and made me so incredibly happy. So amazing! Anyone who likes Fairytail should definitely read this."

Emotional attatchment

"I read this entire story in four days. I have never loved a fanfiction more. Some things I really love: Levy snapping at Lucy "and my boyfriend's Tony Stark" I screamed when I read that. The transition of magic was really astounding, every power was cohesive and it all fit really well. I also loved the happy endings. Igneel living made me much happier. I don't think I had any dislikes. The story was amazing, pure art. I would read this again and again. I REALLY LOVED THIS STORY."

Great work!

"I found out about this fic on Tumblr. I decided to start reading it since so many people were praising your writing skills, and unsurprisingly, they were correct! The plot is wonderful, I love how you incorporated traditional Japanese weapons and techniques into a world much like our own today. There were a few parts with typos, but they can easily be over looked. Overall, this was one of my favorite FT fics and I"m really happy to have read it. Keep up the good work~!"

Loved it!

"The story hooked me in from the start! The plot was so well thought out, it wasn't rushed and there was enough love in every chapter! I've read it twice now and I still love it! Thank you so much for making my day with this story, I will look forward to reading more from you :)"