What is your opinion?
The Assassin’s Guilt
"I loved everything about this story. Your imagery is phenomenal, and I love that you go into details. I hope you’ll be uploading soon because I would want to find out more. Keep up the amazing work! "
The Assasins Guilt
"Assasins, princesses, gems and young love...could this get any better? I am really loving it so far and I can see the potential of this story!! You have amazing writing skills, which everyone can see by your detailed descriptions!! Grammar and vocabulary mistakes can be fixed during editing!! Overall, its a veeeeeery good work and I cant wait to read even more!!"
ACK, IM SPEECHLESS
"Your writing style is so, so, sooooooo professional! It shocked me how perfecr and flowing your style was and how perfect your transitions were! I can already see some great characters beginning to form and it's only the strart! You're imagery is LITERALLY beyond words, it was truly phenomenal. I can not wait to read more, and this definitely deserved five stars and SO many more likes! The plot is already building up and the length of your chapters are the perfect length (long enough for events to happen and for the plot to build and to define your charactera, but not so long that it drags). I wish I had criticism to help you, but really I can't even think of anything. And, let me just say, that the way you began the chapter really just drew me in! Their were no dull moments in this book so far, and your descriptions were beautiful! Even your characters thoughts were on point and I really felt like i was in the book! I can not WAIT to read more! Fantastic job! Bravo!"
Intriguing but Needs Editing
"I'm entranced by the world of this novel so far! I can't wait to read more and get a better sense of the world building and learn more about the main character. My main suggestion is for the author to take some extra time to edit the chapters, there are a lot of grammar mistakes that jar the reader out of the story. The dialogue especially needs some TLC - new lines of dialogue should be capitalized, and there's no need for a space between the quotation marks and the words inside them. I like the love story between the assassin's best friend and the princess, but I can't wait to get back to the main character - I miss her!"
