What is your opinion?
My view
"I like the book more like loving it, am waiting for the second book, I like how he come back for her but i wish to know how it was with other women before her and vice versa, yeah their sex life(forgive my dirty mind)😉"
The weight of desire part 1 : embrace
"I’m blown away by this story. Beautifully written. "
Love
"I am loving this story. I can not wait to see where it goes. I just can’t put it down. Awesome job!"
The Weight Of Desire
"You write beautifully with such finesse. I can’t wait to read on."
A++
"This was beautiful. And oh my God your writing, grammar and description id impeccable❤️❤️ "
Embrace this story
"Your writing style is so amazing. I could really connect with the story and the characters. The details were SOOOO GOOOD. The way you wrote the story made it so easy to become lost in the fantastical world of August and Jezebel. Truly a beautiful story. I found myself crying at certain times throughout it as well. I cant offer any critique because as far as i'm concerned, you don't need any. Absolutely amazing. I myself aspire to be an author one day and your writing skills and technique has really helped me. BRAVO"
Amazing story
"I really loved the descriptions of the places and the characters. The story was short but very intriguing. I will definitely check the sequel."
I really love this story!
"What I liked in this story is that the author really captured the characters feeling and thoughts. The plot was interesting and got u hooked 😁❤"
Blissful!
"Novels like this make me wish I had an August of my very own. The sauce and steamy scenes remind me of whimsical passion in my youth! 5/5 stars!! Please give me more, haha!"
Beautiful!
"First of all, you have a very unique and enchanting way of describing things as well as scenes. I personally am a big fan of that! I never had the feeling like your story was going to fast, although more than a year flew by. I think you made the right choice in not lingering when it wasn't necessary, but taking just the right amount of time to illustrate how strong her feelings were. I also like that you used seasons and not months to describe this :) Also, I really like your take on vampires, instead of going for the stereotypical approach, you were able to present us with a perspective I honestly can say I've never seen before, for example how he is capable of granting other people these special powers. I loved it!"
AMAZING!!!
"I love the plot and the author's writing style. The style makes it feel like old fashioned which was what I was desiring. I do feel that that the way dialogue was done could have be slightly better and in my opinion too many time lapses. But awesome over all!"
Great read
"Hypnotising, great book. Great characters. Well put together"
Hands down a fantatsic book
"I love this book. I love the story, the characters and the flow. The writers style is captivating and her passion for this genre comes through as you progress with the story. Get a good cup of hot chocolate or coffee, settle down in a good chair and read this delightful short story that has lots of heat and breathtaking moments packed in. "
Great first chapter
"This author’s first chapter is a very good example of how to hook a reader! Excellent story"
A GREAT READ
"This story is captivating, I enjoy the authors use of descriptive tones throughout. She paints a beautiful canvas for us the reader to enjoy. Being fully aware that like many novel on here, this is an unedited version, I decided to give Five stars across the board. Look forward to more of this talented ladies writing. Perfection is never found in any novel, they all have mistakes in them."
Captivating
"The author of this masterpiece definitely has a bright future as an author. 100% sure of that. The way everything is described and told just makes you want to be able to do that yourself, it makes you want to continue reading this, and I just can't get enough of it, I can't get enough of the writing style and perfect description. Dear Author, I love this. I love the description, the style, and the story itself. Keep up the good work. Have a great day."
Embrace
"I can say that this book is amazing. I really love how you take me from one day to the other and from days and hour they turn into months so effortlessly. Their chemistry is captivating and I am in love. You introduced him in the best way and unexpected way possible. Everything was so perfect. My only comment is that there are some grammatical mistakes, other than that, I highly recommend this book because it’s absolutely worth it. "
Embrace
"Ms. author you have incredible writing skills!!! Your descriptions are amazing and detailed to the very last bit, especially in the erotic scenes!! I like the story in general and the plot, but I would suggest you spice things a little bit by adding a bit more drama and keep the reader surprised ;)) I like your supernatural twist though!! Makes things more intreguing!! Keep up the good work💓💓💓"
Embrace
"The story way the story is written, it is amazing. Although i am not a big fan of love and romance but this is a really good book. It had me hooked. Will definitely recommend this"
Lust
"Great book!!!"
