Beautiful!
"First of all, you have a very unique and enchanting way of describing things as well as scenes. I personally am a big fan of that!
I never had the feeling like your story was going to fast, although more than a year flew by. I think you made the right choice in not lingering when it wasn't necessary, but taking just the right amount of time to illustrate how strong her feelings were. I also like that you used seasons and not months to describe this :)
Also, I really like your take on vampires, instead of going for the stereotypical approach, you were able to present us with a perspective I honestly can say I've never seen before, for example how he is capable of granting other people these special powers.
I loved it!"