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The new girl and the Alphas

"Nicely done book, it has a good flow, and strong characters."

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Extremely vivid.

"This is extremely detailed story, which I love. Every scene is painted fully. It feels as if you are there with mc. Is for sure for adults only lol. As it's very graphic and has some steamy moments. The mc is a girl who just started at a new school. And wastes no time making her mark. A thrilling story that will keep you reading. Only issue is chapters are bit short so you will run out of fun before long. However that is just a testament to how well this was wrote. Kudos good work, look forward to more content."

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Creative

"I really like your details on everything. It helps make the picture more ear and feels like you are inside the story and experiencing those feelings. I feel like the rest is just normal drama but really like your streamy parts. Keep writing! "

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Very creative!

"I love how the author develops the characters personality! The depiction of the different characters and their emotions and personality really caught me off guard. I felt every one of the emotions coming through. I loved the fact that the plot took change in every direction and the main character was not the "good" girl like in every story. It was different than other books I have read. The grammar was slightly off, but still better than other books I have read. I truly enjoyed it!"

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In love already

"I'm already blown away at how well you describe characters (something I struggle with), develop their personality and give a real hook to the story, all in one chapter! I picked up very few grammatical errors, and apologize for only giving the plot 4 stars. I might change it when there are more chapters, though! I'm already loving the characters and I can't wait for more story to come."

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