What is your opinion?
Good
"Very enjoyable.. Good read after a long time"
Intricate
"This book is fantastic. Lots of details and plot lines come together seamlessly. I love the blending of science with fantasy. Extremely well written. "
Great read!
"This story is captivating to me, I can't wait to see where the story goes! Please keep writing!"
Brilliantly written and executed
"This is a little different from what I usually read but I really enjoyed this story. It was honestly a masterpiece. I loved the world building and the different points of view. Would love to read more of there are more books."
Nice
"Great story! I love how it was given. Good job writer! There is ongoing Novelstar’s writing competition you may want to try."
Escape from Redeem- Rise of an Emperor
"Exceptional storyline. However, spelling and a few grammatical errors were seen as the story progressed. Please take your time to proof read before posting. That being said, this was an excellent book. I await the sequel with great anticipation. "
Amazing
"This story is so cool. It's amazing. Would have been great if could be made into a t.v. series"
Escape from redeem rise of an emperor
"Excellent book enjoyed it very much. Look forward to reading more about these characters. I would recommend it to anyone who likes SiFi."
Engr Kings
"It an exciting piece of work kept me hunch over my tab for hours, with suspense as I turned the page. Waiting for the next part I would recommend this book to bookwarm friends who are sci-fi freaks too The adventure is just beat the imagination I hope we reach this level of technological advancement before we encounter aliens"
Mr nice
"Good very good"
Emperor
"Cool story line finding it hard to put this one down cant stop reading it a really good read cant wsit for the end"
Escape from Redeem, rise of an Emperor
"In general, this was a captivating read. There are several story threads going, and they all wind round each other in a pleasing way. The characters are larger than life, and I would be interested to see where the sequal takes them. Some minor editing would be helpful, but it isn't a huge issue. "
We are living science fiction
"John Kenneth Martin moved with confidence in his compelling and smooth narrative, clearly presenting the eternal struggle between good and evil, with the sole purpose to rule mankind. Prophetic his portrayal of the world overpopulated, the outbreak of III World War, the earth ruled under one government and the killing of millions of human lives. Prophetic also the egotistical and selfish use of the genetic manipulation in order to conquer death. I liked reading Escape From Redeem , Rise of an Emperor, it was a plot well articulated and the characters interesting. Science fiction? Not entirely, but well engaging."
Meri
"Interesting read but the delivery could have taken more time to build up. I would like to see the main character Bruce discover more of his abilities before he took over the prison "
Diversify
"I really do like your story. It's complicated, it's interesting, and you address a lot of problems that many of us will have to deal with in our lifetime. However, I feel that it would add more to your story if you slightly diversified your cast. All of your characters seem to be white men, and I'm not asking you to make eighteen new characters that are women and middle eastern, and Filipino or something.like that. However, if there were a huge amount of deaths in World War III than wouldn't racial group intermix to bring up the population? Not only that but this seems that there is only two female characters mentioned and one is dead. Also you can subtly add things like instead of saying that the Academy only allows men into saying that there are two separate academies. Or maybe say that this Regiment of Combat Nurses are mostly female. Something subtle that will connect this story to more people, and add some interesting things people can mull over. Like I wonder how this Regiment of Combat Nurses works, or maybe the psychic group that Master Tong's son will mostly be women. Just diversify your cast and your world in subtle ways. However I really like this story and its space age Lord of Rings feel."
Nice
"This is a great story. My ratings may look quite harsh, but that's what I really think it is. There is one thing I immediately noticed. A thing you could work on. Look at your summary. Read it aloud and you'll know it doesn't sound right. It is supposed to give us a brief summary of the story, not who it's written by, we readers don't care about that part. It already states who it is already written by. And overall, this story although isn't my style, it's good. Although my ratings should show that I don't read these types of stories., so it's not the sci-fi favorable type. Because one look at your summary shows your entire writing flaws. It's that simple."
saw read you wrote
"a real interesting story. Covered a background and character introduction. I found myself reading the words you wrote and how I speak. Mother and Father = Parents. I also had a sense of daja vue where there was a repetition within chapter one. Somewhat different wording saying what had been said. Good start, suggest rereading out loud, write what you speak.."
