What is your opinion?
Lost treasure
"Fantastic book now waiting for the next episode I’m glad she is being a teenager for a little while and letting her hair down but i do hope she finds out about Gideon "
Waiting for more
"When does the next book come out and what’s the name of it"
Great book
"Super great. I want her to find her mate!"
A good start
"I'm sure the author is already aware of the editing needed. The story line is fantastic but she still hasn't met Ares."
The best ever
"The author is excellent. I love it"
Lost treasure
"I love the dynamics of this book so far. There's alot going on but not overwhelming so. A good read and I will be watching for more."
Sugarlady
"Shit that's it! Oh my. I want more "
Lost treasure
"I love it and can’t wait for more it’s brilliant I got so lost in the story "
lost treasure
"i love the story line, only that i prefer if it were more detailed kudos on the story so far cuz am LOVING IT"
Lost treasure
"Great story"
Love it
"Oh come on lol give me more!!!!!!"
So good !!!!
"Just keeps getting better !!! Looking forward to the next chapter !!!! "
Wow
"very nise I will be happy when you leave nice comment to my story like this"
REVIEW
"I take it, you love fantasy. I do too, all of us do. A great story, I'd like to read more."
The lost treasure
"It's a nice story........Are you planning to complete it"
The plot got lost
"From the first to the second it seems the plot got lost as the character got more into and focused on sex. With that being said having a young teen have sex isn't very accepted in many parts of the world regardless if it's a fictional werewolf or not. The characters keep talking about their human forms and being human and their having sex as humans; it's something that can throw many off the plot. There is enough spank material to also throw some off as I basically wanted to scroll through those sections and get on with the story. Some constructive criticism; you may want to put space or double space between paragraphs and watch your paragraph lengths and run on sentences. Spacing helps the reader not get lost with the sentences. Right now, in this story, there isn't anyone the main character can trust and there are no other side characters that she can turn to that remain. Her red flags should have gone up and stayed up when Gideon re-entered the scene as her Father refused him in the first book, "Lost Treasure: Into the City." The pack was attacked almost instantly afterwards."
