What is your opinion?
Amazing
"I really loved your writing. It's impressive that someone so young wrote something so advanced. I really liked the plot and the narration. Your story has an unique voice. I saw a few technical errors but those can be fixed while editing. Overall, good job."
A rather interesting read.
"This is a rather interesting read, like the story is being told by the disjointed thoughts in a killers head. It is not an easy read by any means, much like Finnegan’s Wake . But their is a story there , for those willing to take on this adventure "
Unusual Story
"I can't say I've ever read a story like this. It is different. I thought it was a bit disjointed at first, so carried on reading. It started to make more sense. Though I'm still not sure about the cops and what they do or did. There is an obvious relationship with Jame and Val, though where it will lead, we need to wait and see. Keep writing so we can unravel the mysteries you've given us. Can you give us more description of the characters and the background? What the house is like, What the town is like. etc Good on the grammar and punctuation, only a couple of obvious errors which happen in all draft work. Well done."
