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Pointless writings of a pathetic writer.

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Summary

What is the point of a writer who only writes for themselves? Should they have more to say or less to write? Read or unread would the meaning persist or evaporate like mist never to have reached the lips of a single soul. Wretchedness uttered in selfish allegory and labors of pity. Could a pathetic writer, never an accomplished writer, have meaning beyond simple sermons and zealous phrasing? No or yes, undetermined.

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7yrs ago
Chapters
2
Rating
n/a
Age Rating
18+

My mother loved me.

Two words were not said ever in presence of me or others. A sought after feeling I can't claim to have known but, on my own, sought for my own. I've seen it from those who claimed love for pity of what they thought I needed. They've achieved it. A pat on the back, a smudge of the hair. Elated, their face, I saw as I stare. On my own, I have not seen that here. Words to chase, two, but never heard. "I'm Proud", not so renowned. I have never heard the sound. You've stuck to the ground, loud but never around. Am I proud?

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