What is your opinion?
Tears
"A few sentence structure errors and occasionally some spelling issues, but a very engaging story. "
Tekna
"This story is highly intelligent, & interesting. Action packed, & so much lesson to be learned"
Tekna
"I will reccomend this to my best friend for I knew she will enjoy this as much as I do. I like the twist and turns of events and it makes me want to read more and more without stopping. Thanks for this i enjoyed it so much. I'll be continuing to support your stories."
Great
"I love the book so much it’s great. It reminds me of the movies I would watch with my dad growing up. "
Nice work
"Your story as an abundant potential, compelling and interesting but I advise on more ckarater development because if you ave a stronj carater, protanist. You ave a stron plot. All in all, I sawy well done. I love tis concept of Tekna and some factors about Mia."
Interesting
"I find the story very interesting so far, the fact that Mia is not fully aware of who or what she is. I was, however, shocked to find out she has a friend in chapter 3 after the author adamantly portrayed her as not being the friendly type. I think that the exception of her having that one friend should have been mentioned or established in chapter 2 to avoid confusion. Other than that, your story is very compelling, can't wait to see what her search about Tekna will reveal."
There's some good stuff in here
"I didn't see too many errors as I went through, Just little ones (a run through Grammarly might be useful to you). The story itself was fine, but the characters kind of felt flat, so you might want to work on building them up more. The dialogue also felt pretty generic and lacked the personality it could bring to each character. It's not "bad" really, it's just missing the connection to the audience that engages a reader to care about what happens to Mia or Andrew or... anyone else in the story."
Meh
"Story doesn't grab me. Not a lot of character building. "
