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Poetry

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Summary

I love poetry, it can be so beautiful. It can express happiness or sadness. It can tell a story, a memory. My poems are my stories and my random thoughts throughout the day. I hope you enjoy and please don't steal my work. ❤️

Status
7yrs ago
Chapters
1
Rating
5.0 (4 reviews)
Age Rating
13+

Our Fight

"Beautifully damaged" that's what they say

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But really they ruined that person's day.

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Broken that's what we are, with scars and pain

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Alone or not, that's what felt either way.

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In the day time, we're all smiles and laughter

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A facade, but it disappears after.

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Alone, they are breaking down bit by bit,

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Sobbing, pain, agony: a disaster.

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Sometimes if we are lucky, we can talk.

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If not, we will break and snap just like chalk.

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Feelings bottled up for a while, explode.

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The aftermath sends people into shock.

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Maybe, just maybe, we'll find our light,

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That will keep us alive, through our fight.

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We may feel like we are at our end.

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But this is just the moon blocking the light.

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Are you enjoying my ongoing story? Please let me know what you think by leaving a review! Thanks, feminist_honey14

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Love this

4

Love this

Funny

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Funny

Spicy

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Spicy

Suspenseful

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Suspenseful

Emotional

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Emotional

Profound

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Profound

Heartwarming

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Heartwarming

Shocking

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Shocking

Good Writing

3

Good Writing

Compelling Plot

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Compelling Plot

Great Character

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Great Character

Strong Dialog

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Strong Dialog

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author

it is interesting

4 years
author

Hey! I just read your story and I really liked the way everything is written. It has a lot of depth, emotion, and visual potential that could translate really well into a comic. Some parts especially feel like they would look incredible when illustrated. I wanted to ask if you already have a comic adaptation of it. If not, I’d be glad to connect and explore the idea of converting it into a comic together.
@instagram _harperr_
@discord harper_clark

6 months
author

💔💔💔

2 months

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