What is your opinion?
The Underworld is Here?!
"This book was such an amazing read! Honestly, I loved the rhyming. I would never be able to rhyme like that. Grammar was... not the best. Let's just say there's a lot of room for improvement. I'm never really interested in the gods(except for Him), but this really caught my attention. Great work!"
Very different
"I was really finding a zombie story.. loved it....."
First Chapter
"Okay so I don't know anything like a bad book or at least not yet so the first chapter gets a solid all five. The horror didn't take forever to start so that was nice. I hope to cobtinue it with time. "
Zombies
"I have never been a Zombie fan but this book is fantastic! I love the way that the gods are coming out and killing the zombies as well as saving the humans. Great book for teens and up. Looking forward to the next experiences for Jim, Astro and Susan."
a twist to the apocalypse
"I like the story. The story progresses very quickly with very little drama. The chapters do pull me along and keep me interested in what might happen next. The scripts need to be reviewed and edited. I will definitely keep reading the book. My only complaint is that the hero does not struggle much in the beginning. Perhaps create battle scenes from his home to the temple and how he survived the demon and zombie attacks. Overall I loved the twist you used to make a magical zombie apocalypse. It shows your imagination. Good luck, and happy writing. Looking forward to more of the story!"
Fast pace, fun characters
"The character's interactions with one another is hilarious. I especially adore the god Astros (I think he shows up in chapter 5). Susan is a wonderfully strong female character. She does not shy away from anyone, not even Astros. I look forward to each chapter that is posted."
Horrifying, but Mediocre Grammar
"Wow! The story created a mood of boredom, followed by gripping the reader by the balls and never letting go with its frantic paragraphs. However, this leads to what I call the "run-on paragraph" phenomenon for both writing and grammar, and you got several technical errors in your final. Still, a solid story!"
Fantastic!
"Whoa, whoa like to be frank, I do not ever indulge in zombie books but this one...was definitely worth the risk on reading. I love how the story did not dawdle, it was a good, snap pace to the rising action and then the Climactic pinnacle, every reader craves which is the action, the dread and all of those fear-inducing sensations. Truly admirable!"
