What is your opinion?
amazing plot
"till now i have loved everything about the story, be it zay's cuteness and fiesty nature or trevor's arrogancy. i still dont understand somethings but i am sure with time and more chapters i will. elaboration of things is still required though but evrything else is amazing..."
Ironclad writing!
"Gosh, how I adore a fierce protagonist. From what I have read so far, you have made a strong character development which is very suited to the title of the book and can I say just say I love the humor, the side notes and internal thoughts. Please...write on!"
It's really amazing when reading it as a reader and not as an author.
"I like that the protagonist is really feisty and outgoing "
The novel is quite good. However you could improve your volcabular and write in a way that connects with the readers.
"Very good book you have a great future as an author. Keep up with it!"
Iron girl
"The plot is a bit confusing am not sure who is who at some point. One can't ignore grammar,punctuation and spelling mistakes. It's a nice read and I hope it is worth my time."
The Iron Girl
"*This is written of an ongoing story* Some stories I read are based on a shy protagonist meeting this possessive idiot and then they fall in love. But this story the protagonist is fierce, strong and independent which I love about her. From what I've read so far the protagonist has made strong character development, the story itself has great humour. For the critique, I've found a few grammatical and punctuational errors, I also suggest looking into different writing styles because knowing your writing style can definitely improve the way you write. If for certain parts you need to change the style it helps to know what your style is so you can work from there. :)"
