What is your opinion?
Xérès Éveillé
"Catchy plot and interesting characters!"
Lights Out Review
"This is the first Lycan themed story I have read, and I find it very intriguing and interesting. The author has done a lot of research on the subject and it shows through the writing. Witty dialogue, charming characters, some really fun and steamy chapters await the reader. Enjoy the ride. "
lights out
"omg cant wait for the rest..... just love it."
Binge worthy
"I read the entire book in one go. The story is well written. The plot is really cool. The main lead character is excellently written. Looking forward for more chapters!!"
Cool!
"I really enjoyed the plot, and loved the characters"
Lucan legion
"Llove the way the story is going I'm waiting for the next chapter"
Missy
"Good book with a lot of action "
One of my favorites
"This story is one of my favorites. It's written extremely wrll and the story line is amazing. It really caltures your attention. And not to forget the dyanmic between ro and the prince of darkness. It's really fun"
Lights Out
"This is just the beginning of the story and I can't get enough. Mandi is an amazing wrighter, from what I've seen so far, and there story leaves me craving more at the end of each chapter! They are not afraid to broach more difficult topics but, gives a thorough warning and an explanation for why. Finding this during quarantine it's a great break from the real world. Can't wait to see where the story goes! 😁 Remember to wash your hands, stay safe, and healthy❤"
Nice.
"Nice. I like the story, the plot is interesting. I love the main character because she Is strong."
A Diamond In The Rough!
"This book takes the reader on a well-planned journey, full of interesting, unique characters. The worldbuilding will draw you in! Can't wait to see where this goes!"
A Nice Plot, But Strange Delivery
"I've read about half of this book before putting it down, not because it gripped me, but because I really hoped it would improve as it went on. The author has an odd approach to writing that I haven't quite encountered in many literary proses. They randomly switch from narration to description to narration, and eventually it becomes repetitive. I feel the author could restructure the layout of the paragraphs so that the description comes before the narration. There were a lot of grammatical errors, more than I've seen in a web-novel. Please, have this checked by either Grammarly or an editor. I'd presume the community would be beneficial as well. The plot takes its time developing, which is weird given the context of the story. It really spins its wheels at times. I'd suggest, when rewriting, cutting out everything that is not the story. There are also plotholes that I won't get into in case it spoils the story for someone, but I feel the author recognises them already. Overall it could use some work."






