What is your opinion?
Since You've been Gone
"I was completely inspirit to read this when I read the story description. Honestly, I love how you put words into it though the scenes were cliché. I love that rhyming, especially the context of chapter two. I would love to add your novels on my reading list.🧡"
Marvelous
"This book really caught my attention. I really like drama and it was very interesting."
A lesbian romance you didn't know you needed.
"I love this read, each character is very dynamic and I love each and everyone of them. I flew through each chapter unable to put it down, it's not just a romance there's also real life issues. I love my girl Cooper! My only critique is how choppy the plot can be at times, maybe some more description of what's happening? Overall, loved."
Yoooo
"One of the best books I've ever read, on my mama"
Crushed It!
"I actually loved this book. See, its not just a romance, its a real life situation, because not everyone is accepted. This book, actually proved that some people's thoughts are clouded, to the point where when we do something the other gender doesn't like, we're the bad guys. GO GET YOUR GIRL COOPER, AND KEEP FIGHTING THOSE CHALLENGES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
well
"You see the thing is that i feel this story is ...so freaking cute. not in sunshine and rainbow cute but the type where you can't stop reading it. not over detailed nor is is lacking...it is as if it is just what the reader needs . i am enjoying it so far. hope to read more."
🤩🤩
"I really enjoyed the story. It's a very good story with great plot and nice characters. It is great that no one is perfect in the story, that makes it more relatable. I think at some parts there should have been more description. But other than that everything is fantastic."
Good
"First of all, great title one of the best karaoke break up songs ever. The description is a bit disorientation though because it goes from the narrator and this girl bashing into each other to the rundown of the characters. I would look at that again. It also doesn't make sense at times. The quotes at the start of each chapter are nice. There are a couple of problems with punctuation, C.J., for example, should be either C.J or CJ. Also, her saying she is half Italian half Haitian would be more natural than going into exact percentages. You need to make sure you start a new paragraph when there is a new speaker and there are a couple of times where there is a capital letter where there shouldn't be. You don't need to repeat C.J’s full name at the start of the second chapter, or about her sexuality. You could reveal it in the second chapter when she talks about keeping secrets. You also need to look at the size of your paragraphs, they are too small and some are just sentences on their own. C.J is a loveable character and I think you should push to show more of her character in the story, just make sure you don't repeat yourself. Overall this is a good story that needs fine-tuning but has a dramatic plot with emotion. "
Needs a little work but still a really good read
"On an entertainment level, this book is really good. That being said there are quite a few technical problems that can be easily fixed to make this book a knock out. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!"
Good Foundation
"The writer cares about their characters, and the passion for the story is clear. But the story was so much more Told than Shown that I just didn't get drawn in. Please keep writing!"
