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First Horror review

"I absolutely adore this horror story! The plot was amazing, the characters were well written, and I love the fact you didn't go with most cliches or gore or stuff like that that many horror media uses! While there were a few grammatical errors, they didn't deter the story and the story remained strong despite it! Any horror lovers can feel free to take a shot at it!"

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Creepy

"Singing dancing and clapping "

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The dark street

"Outstanding brilliance, the plot is very good. The grammar didn't seem like a problem to me but the chapters were way too long but I adjusted well. Very good👍🏻 Keep up the good work."

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The dark street

"Outstanding content, very nice imagination , I can visualize it , keep it up "

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Angelena

"Great story. Pretty horrific but makes sense "

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First of all, i didn't understand the novel is.. But i do read and continue reading, imagine it, feel the situation is. Then i get the point !! And i do understand now hehehe. It's really interesting and thrilling with full of suspense!! Great job dear author !!

"I like this novel so much, for first it bit confusing but then i can understand it well !! Really loved it. I do want to finish this in one night 😂💝 i'm reading just now and gonna end the novel in couple of hours. It's really recommended for everyone especially for horror lover. Full of thrilling and suspension content. Salute !!"

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Loved it

"I like this book very much It's quite interesting and mysterious I will surely recommend this to my friends"

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Way to long

"I don’t like how long it is I would recommend this only to my friend to help me read this with them Grammar is good but WHAT THE HECK SO MANY WORDS"

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Great story too read

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3 out of a 5

"Some of the words don't make sense"

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The Dark Street

"Ok I wasn't sure there was any mistakes. I was off the app but I remember the story. Like I loved the story so much I really hope there is more. "

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Love the writing style!

"I absolutely love this. I can vividly imagine everything going on and the story plot in itself is so captivating. the author does an AMAZING job at portraying the events. There are a few very minor gramatical errors(I think you forgot to put a . in a place and a few spelling errors thought the chapter) but overall it's a great read :) I am excited for the updates for sure! Great Job!!!"

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Dark street

"Your way of writing is extremely captivating.The plot was amazing and at places I even had chills. Almost most chapters were ending with a suspense that arose an urge to keep reading further. And the way you've explained the character's feelings is so good that I could literally feel them too. Good work. Can't wait to read more."

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A thrilling tale

"A great read, sort of like a twilight zone episode , full of great characters and chilling scenes, a solid plot ! A few grammatical issues, bit nothing that cannot be fixed with a more thorough editing...,"

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Dark woman

"Goooddddddddd "

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Horrible street

"This story is amazing ,for me this is best horror story "

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A great ride into the twilight zone of reality

"A very Captivating read, full of interesting characters, situations and engaging characters.. there is a fine line between reason and reality, and this story is crossing both, repeatedly. "

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Steady intrigue

"This was definitely something else! You had my mind warped in this world you created and this dilemma you have forged. You have quite the building abilities in a sense that its steady, not rushed and a goody steady climb to the rising action where picks up, smoothens and ascends to the climax. I really admire than in your style of writing."

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Great

"I liked the thrill and the mystery of this movie 10/10. Even though there were some grammar errors I was still able to make out what the author was saying. I would recommend this book to anyone who is into horror"

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Very catchy

"The writing skill is good The story is captivating "

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