What is your opinion?
Great work.
"I love the bond shown between the two. Overall a great one. Keep going!!!"
Unique story line
"Your plot is well thought of and everything flows so well. Your characters are well developed and a reader can easily relate to then. I like how in every chapter we get to learn a new thing. This is a really great story!"
An amazing story!
"This book had me at the start, the introduction was truly jaw dropping and I was amazed by the start of the book, so good first impression! As I read the book along, the storyline brancher out and got really interesting, though the dialogue could use a bit of work. Like all books, there are some edits that should be made, but they story line is pure gold and enticing. My meagre intellectual abilities don’t have any qualifications to make a review someone should take to heart, but this book was indeed wonderful. Looking forward to more stories! Chip :D"
An Amazing World
"A truly delightful read! Your world is so unique, so interesting. Magic and shadow manipulation, aneorld behind a mirror, it's just all so interesting! Your characters are well developed as well and your prose delightful. My only suggestion would to give it a little bit of editing. You have a really fantastic piece here. Keep up the good work! "
Amazing!!!
"This book is a masterpiece! I love the plot and the way the characters are experiencing dimensions. At first, I wasn’t as developed into the story but now, I’m so hooked into the story. Can’t wait till it’s completed! Keep it up!👍"
Vast world, exciting story
"There is so much going on in this story. The author does a great job of revealing new things in every chapter rather than dropping it all on the reader at once. There are a lot of characters and each has their own personality. There are some grammatical errors, but I believe most of them come from the authors decision to change some of the text to first person rather than the original third. Some required changes have been missed, and it can make the reading somewhat confusing. With another round of editing, I’m sure these will be found and fixed. Overall, this is a great story. It is very clear that you have putt a lot of work and thought into this world."
Where Have You Been, my Oblivion?
" This review refers to the first chapter only ... On a seemingly ordinary day, thirteen year old Chance and his best friend Jaden attend school which is filled with boring lectures. Chance tries his best to remain focused on his teacher but he daydreams anyway and sees his own shadow mysteriously move and shift even as Chance himself remains still. Is this an illusion? Or has he gained some wonderfully new super power? After school Chance tries to demonstrate his new skills for Jaden but he fails miserably and this causes Jaden to regard him with suspicion. But after leaving the movie theater, the two boys encounter a dark and dangerous entity. Suddenly Chance knows he is in the fight for his life. Will his new powers be enough to save himself and Jaden. Or will they fail him yet again? This chapter ends with quite the cliffhanger. I enjoy super hero stories. (I’m a huge Batman fan, myself.) And I liked the Batman connection of a possible fatal crime occurring at the exit of a movie theater. (I picked up some nice Shazam vibes too in Chance’s sardonic but youthful personality) Interesting enough I couldn’t find any grammatical errors in this chapter. However there were on a few occasions an unusual phrasing of the English language that was mildly distracting at times. But nothing fatal to the story. I’m hoping Chance survives his encounter with the dark stranger and becomes the superhero he is destined to be. Go Chance! "
