What is your opinion?
Wow
"Loved the story, keep writing, good work."
A Story With So Much Potential!
"This plot is so alluring and it draws the reader in so quickly within two short chapters. I applaud the author for acheiving this. It is a work in progress, scattered with very minor technical issues (such as typos and tense switches), which is why I was not able to give the technical skills a 5. This is still extremely well developed, though, which is why it definetly earned a 4, and would be increased to a 5 once it's edited! The plot was intriguing, and I want to see it further developed with more inward reflection. This author is a pro with describing the characters emotions and thoughts--use this to your advantage, author! Help us dive into the world of this tragic tale and bring us on the roller coaster that is to come :)"
Lovely
"I loved this story- quite short but contains great message. Loved the way you described everything...It was perfect"
loved it
"i dont why but like this book very much. I cant get it out of my head"
wow
"gonna delete my book this is serious, your writing style is amazing the way you detail but quick and snappy Ii agree with others I can see this as a short movie, love conquers all. i want more :) so interesting clear to read and understand it was like action romance a story all in one fast and furious I love it xx"
Brian
"I can truly see this like a short movie.... it was very well written...very good description of actions, and choice of words.... not bad fo English being a second language"
