What is your opinion?
Nice!!
"The punctuation and grammatical errors are a bit too much"
Colorless
"I like the romance and mystery. And I like how protective the main character is. "
I can't take my eyes of it, can't wait to see what happens next
"I'm falling in love with your book @loltales, it's really creative."
I absolutely love it!!!
"When I learned about this book, I was really intrigued by it. I got really into it and read all the chapters submitted without any breaks and in less than twenty minutes. This is rare for me because usually I read a book and take my time, but this one had me itching to press "Next Chapter". I waited a bit before writing this review because I wanted to read a bit more and get to know Ariel more before writing my thoughts. I do have to say that this is one of my most favorite books and I really love the plot and the way everything is going. I hope Ash is okay and that nothing bad happens to him and I hope Ariel and Zane get together because they seem like they would be the perfect couple and they are meant for each other!!! I can't wait to read new chapters and find out what happens!!! Great job and continue the amazing work!!!"
One of the most interesting novel
"I've read novels based on things like these, hell divergent is one of them and I must tell you that this is by far the most interesting one. ♡♡ "
Colourless by Loltales
"This is a fantastic read which I am completely in live with. The writing just flows absolutely perfectly. The plot is fantastic. The language used is amazing. The way that this book has been written makes me so into the book, nd is me on the edge of my seat, and absolutely enraged at a certain chapter regarding a certain little boy (not revealing anything else, guess you gotta read it to find out! 😜😉). This is one of my favourite books on here, and I am so glad I get to read it. I recommend this book to anyone who has a love of fantasy, slightly futuristic humans, and are ready to be enthralled with this superb piece of writing. 🧡❤📖💜📚💙💚 😆😁😜"
Colourless
"When you dropped your book suggestion on my wall I wasn't realy sure if I would give it a try. But after reading the first few chapters you had me hooked. The character developement of Ariel when she was kicked out of the team was brillant. She didn't give up, she set her priorities and proved that family comes first. I liked how you described the city with the little details. You feel with the characters when something happens. You are overjoyed, angry, shocked, surprised ect. The relationship between the family members, friends and team mates was beautifully written. Over all I loved your writing stile, plot and characters. I'm not able to review your punctuation ect. because english is not my first language. I looked at over reviews and reviewed after. Keep up the good work. I am excited what's going down next. X, ❤️"
Colorless
"Live the plot plz update I can’t wait to read more ❤️❤️❤️"
Colourless
"Loving this story and can't wait to find out what happens!!"
Color me Happy
"Characters: Ariel is different from the trend of "so-called" action girls out there because she is shown to actually struggle and not have things handed out to her. She can also lose which is good. She is noble, has a heart and is not a mary-sue as she can hold grudges against people and can let her emotions control her which is good. I wish I could see more of the other characters, but I liked the professor, Mister Ozumakibakidakiwaki, because he is a grumpy bear, mean outside but nice inside. I liked Thawne too because he plays all "oh I'm a funny man" but then he gets all guilty and nice with Ariel, this is something that I find so cute in a guy. So basically, my three favorite characters are Thawne, Ariel and Mister Roast-aki Story: I love the idea of a character who is different from the other and I love it even more because I guessed what it would be. I also liked the escalations of the event, Ariel losing her team membership made her more focused on finding a solution for Ash. Then, I would advise you to write with less verbs ending in "-ing" but that's all."
This is really good,and I can't wait to read more!😁
"This is really interesting, and it's got a good plot, I can't wait to read more and see what happens next! 😁😁"
Colourless
"I really like this so far. It's something different and I'm really intrigued at why Ash is colourless and what's going to happen. Some spelling and grammar issues but nothing that can't be fixed easily. Great start"
Good story
"Damn, I really like the story so far. Its concept is new and quite unique from other books out there. I'm not the one who likes reading fantasy but I really liked this story. Keep up the work and all the best for your future works.💓 ××priya××"
A family bond can never be broken
"A quite descriptive, creative and captivating story. "
unprecedented
"Such a unique plot, I wonder how you got the idea, this is great! You described everything so beautifully that I could visualize each scene vividly. I got hooked from the very first chapter, surfing through each chapter rather than skimming. However, there are some minor grammar mistakes - use Grammarly to avoid these minor issues. Overall, it was a refreshing read, keep writing:)."
Love the Plot
"I liked the plot and would recommend this book to fans of the Divergent series!"
Amazing Book
"The book is great! Spelling could use some help on some parts, but overall the book is great. It has such an unique book with a plot that gets you hooked on the first chapter. If you want something you’ve never read before, read this! I totally recommend this!"
Colourless
"Dont stop writing please..never read anything like this before based on colours..how did u think that up..you have brought the story together by explaining the family links to colours..the fight scene was great ..I love how brother and sister are so close and then the twist that been colourless could be above all the other colours and unique..thankyou for letting me read your story and I pray you will carry on..you have talent and a vivid imagination so go for it..there were few spelling mistakes but nothing to moan about..congratulations my new friend "
COLOURfull
"The plot and the idea of the novel was amazing. The thought of the whole concept keeps readers very excited. The idea is very original. Just keep remembering to revise your chapter as there are some slight grammar issues. Overall, amazing!"
Beautiful
"Waiting to read more! "
