What is your opinion?
Very good
"The grammar was not so good, in some places after the point was written small. But it's good tbh"
Princess
"I love this book so much❤😍"
Xérès Éveillé
"Definitely interesting"
Beautiful!
"I love everything about this book from the plot to the characters to your use of detail! Keep up the good work!"
awesome
"can't wait to read more!"
Amazing!❤️
"I completely loved it! Amazing work! Can’t wait to read more❤️"
i love it!
"cool book i love it!😂😆😊☺"
Princess
"So far the story great. Your writing style is pretty great there is not much to say since it's the first chapter but i can't wait for more !"
A very Good start
"an excellent idea for a storyline, only the first chapter was written as of the time of this review, but it promises to be a good story and will get even better ! "
Princess
"This is a nice book I can't wait to see what happens and how Elisabeth get's along with her family but I did find a few grammar mistakes but it's nothing that can't be fixed I also felt like the third chapter was a bit rushed"
Princess
"I have only started reading the story, and it is pretty poorly punctuated. There aren’t capital letters when there needs to be and commas are all in the wrong place. Besides bad grammar though, I really have started to enjoy it. I’m only on the second page and I want to keep reading. I understand the book is not finished yet however, but maybe check the grammar is on point👌"
New way to tell a story
"I like it, the narrative to the story is very well written. There are a little bit of grammar error that need closer attention and edit."
Good start!
"Although there's only one chapter, I can tell that this will be a very cool story! There's so much tension already! I think this chapter could do with a bit of editing, especially with punctuation. I noticed in many pieces of dialogue that there should be commas or periods to make the speaking sound more natural. In addition, there were also a few grammatical mistakes that could be fixed easily. This is a compelling start to the story, and I'm excited to see what will happen!"
