What is your opinion?
Something different!
"I absolutely loved this book! You've come a long way my dear author! This was definitely a different story, with a strong female character, which I always admire. It was crisp and admirable. Thank you for writing, keep it up.❤️❤️"
Love it!!
"I can tell you are becoming a beautiful young lady. Great writing skills as well, Keep it up!"
Good read
"The book was truly amazing. It was terse but intimidating. I really loved the word flow and all the things.. U have few grammatical errors, but who doesn't have them?? After few editing it will be all set to go... Anyways i really loved the plot. Keep writing😊🤘✌"
Lots of potential
"Let me start by saying this story has a lot of potential. The first three chapters have a lot of action and backstory to them are very intriguing and so far the story itself is quite unique and I definitely haven’t seen something like this before, which is a great plus to anyone who reads! However one thing that would make the story even better is having a lot more description about the characters and their environment. I feel like things move a lot faster than they should when it comes to story progression. She’s on the run and she always has to hop from place to place. What would make the story carry more weight is when you take the time to describe the journey she took to get there. There could be an entire sub plot in the first few chapters of her journey to London. You could be very creative in how she makes her way to London and create a mini story in that so that this huge and irrational decision she makes doesn’t feel so weightless and hold zero value. For example, let’s say we get to see her go through the majority of the process of restarting her identity and we follow that until she decides that the way she makes it to London is actually by sneaking her way onto a massive cruise ship where London is their pit stop and you get to see the experience of her having downtime in her travels while being limited to living on a boat for a few days before things pick back up in the next crucial plot point or something. That was just a random example but anything like that could easily be enough to help expand a better understanding of who she is as a character since there are plenty of people she will end up meeting with whatever she decides to do as a way of travel. With all that said you don’t have to listen to me, that’s just my opinion. This is your book and what you have written is still phenomenal either way and it’s also a different viewpoint than what most stories in the fantasy genre would convey which is already an eye-catcher. And this one preference will not stop me from still enjoying and reading your story. 💖💕"
