What is your opinion?
My mystery man
"It's a really good book and I would recommend it to my friends "
I love this it was so nice
"I like it because it was so romantic and there is a adventure kind of I would share this with some o my friend I choose tho rating cuz it was nice the chapters "
My mystry man
"I really like this Hanrahan and the word it was alot and I loved the part were they bestfriends when they were kids."
No words 🥳
"M in love with the plot 💕❣️💟"
My Mystery Man
"I'm bummed I wanted to keep reading. Your story is GREAT!! Right from the beginning. And Damien's character and even Rick's character........has me all giddy, and butterflies and sending shivers all over my body. Will there be more chapters or a sequel. Thank you so much for having it on this app. ☺😊😍💗"
Suuuuuuuper
"It's toooo good I liked this novel very much it's sooo intresting and mysterious I loved this novel I have no words to describe it but I loved it ♥️♥️♥️♥️"
Awesome
"So awesome. I would love to read more chapters. Please update soon. 😁"
My Mystery Man
"I really enjoyed the first few chapters. You had a lot of detail and I also like how well you're keeping the man's identity hidden."
Hope This Helps!
"Your writing is impressive. As a writer though, there is always room for improvement. Before I dive into some tips, here are things that I liked. I thought that the dialogue was beautiful. I enjoyed you didn't use, for example, "she says" when it is clear who the person is talking to. You implemented two dialogue styles. The first being like the following: "Emma?" "Yes" "How are you." The second dialogue style you used replaced "she said" with actions. This is good because the readers can learn a lot about a character from nonverbal communication. This includes gestures, body language, etc. The second thing I liked is the action with each chapter. The action was beautifully written and made the reader turn to the next page. The third thing I liked is the characters that you created, especially Autumn. Last, but not least, something I loved was the emotional scene. I found it to be beautifully written and touching. There are tips that I have for you. You can decide to use them or to disregard them. It is your choice to do whatever with the following. However, these aren't meant to harm you but to help you. I apologize in advance if it does bring harm. The first tip is to show the readers, instead of telling them. The first line tells the reader how the wall is. The second shows the reader how it is. (1)The wall was rough. (2)The cut-out, differing chunks scratched against my smooth fingertips. We have a lot of senses and the best writers play on them. The second tip I have is to be mindful of characters. It is common for writers to romanticize Stockholm Syndrome. Stockholm Syndrome is when the victim falls in love with their kidnapper. In reality, not a lot of people actually do. The third tip I have is to be mindful of grammar. It is good to have people review the chapters for errors before you post. I usually do that when I can. I didn't see any so far, but it's just a helpful tip. My last tip is to enjoy your writing. It is essential to love what you do. You are talented! I wish the best for you going forward."
The Mystery Man
"Ofcourse I like everything about this. This is really captivating and mind boggling to read. Once you start u cannot stop but switch to next chapters "
A must read for Mystery lovers
"This story is so mysterious and I love it, as these kind of stories are my thing... I hope Autumn finds out the truth about Lombardi, her kidnapping as well as realizes that Damien was once her best friend✨✨✨ Hat‘s off to the writer for writing such an amazing story♥️♥️♥️ All the best for the future Charms👻"
So amazing!! Love it.
"Your story is superb.. I really love the whole story plot, specially that mystery man. Oh my God, the way you described about him is so good.. And Autumn, OMG she is like a bomb, so strong so perfect. I'm so very excited to know what will happen next. Please update soon author.. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤"
Wonderful
"The plot is amazing, i love the main character, wonderful story to read"
Engaging, mysterious read! Plot twists everywhere
"I really enjoy reading this story. mostly bc this is a mysterious book by far. I like the details written throughout the story, mostly the explanation behind Autumns name. I think this story starts off with quite a few grammatical and spelling errors so I am not sure if you want to read the first couple chapters and edit those. However the further I read into the story the less errors I spotted. even thought a few spelling errors, I was still very into this story. Great job so far and keep it up! "
Great!!
"Wow I was impressed!! Great story I was glad to read it!"
My Mystery Man
"Honestly, great work! I'm so captivated it's not even funny- I love Autumn and I feel bad for her and what her situation is. BUT alas, I love the concept of this book and I know she'll have a happy ending. Do work on the grammar though, there's some places where it needs work."
My Mystery Man
"THIS BOOK IS SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!! I LOVE HOW HE JUST GOT UP AND CLAIMED HER!! WHAT A DOMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!! I can´t wait for more and Im excited to read what happens between the two. I really like how it started! I love how you did not jump into it quite yet cause I hate when there is huge time skips and stuff. Amazing job!!!!!"
Roychoudhury’s Best Book Ever ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
"So, I loved how the author gave us some of Autumn’s POV first and to get inside her head a lot and to understand her backstory. It was really amazing to see what she does for a living and how smart, fun, loving Autumn is. I also loved it when got some of the stalkers POV & got into his mind as well and to see what goes through his head too. When I was through chapter 3 and chapter 9, I was trying to figure out who the stalker is until I did figure it out. I’m just a slow reader and slow person but I catch up pretty fast. I’m just so glad I’m reading my mystery man, it just a thrilling book with so much twist and turns that leave shocked and your mouth dropping that you want more and more chapters. The author is a real artist who strives into bringing her work to life, I always believe in your work and support you ! Keep it up and reach for the stars author because you have so many followers just like me that have your full support and belief in what you do ! Keep writing and keep being you ! 😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄"
My Mystery Man
"Such a great book... The plot is good.. And the main character is awesome.. A strong woman.. I like that... Keep up the good work... I love the book👍 "
Good
"I like the plot of the story. You could be a bit more descriptive of the main characters and avoid spelling mistakes. I use grammarly. It is really helpful. Apart from that, I loved your book. It is quite different ❤️"
