Inkitt
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The cafe

"I loved the plot and in between I got confused between characters. You have a great future, keep on writing. Waiting for more updates. Eager to know what happens next. All the best champ 👍 "

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The Cafe

"Really interesting read. Characters are well developed and the interaction between them is really well written. A few issues with grammar and capitalization, nothing we don’t all have and easily fixed with editing Cannot wait to read more! "

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Awesome

"I had like to start by saying that the cover and the title is very compelling. Next up, I like the plots and the characterisation of the characters. Except for some grammatical errors here and there, this would be a five-star rating."

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I love stories that gives you a lot of information, description about the character, and i got it here.

"What i like is the mysterious hangover."

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Te cafe

"SPLENDID!nice plotting . loved it. Next time try to create more distinction between characters. Other then that your story is awsome👍.Take care!"

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The cafe

"Gripping start! I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters!💚💜"

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Sweet!

"I see a lot of potential in the writer and the plot is good too. The grammar is right and with practice, you'll grow to be a famous author Soon. Best of luck! "

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